Feelings Stirring Within.......revisted and renamed Part I

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Open Poetry #30

Feelings Stirring Within.......revisted and renamed Part I

garysgirl

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since 2002-09-29

Posts 19237
Florida, USA

0 posted 2003-12-30 11:56 AM

Our kisses awakened feelings
suppressed
for much too long
Pushed way down into
the very depths of
ourselves

Into our inner beings
where
We would allow
no-one
Not even ouselves to
explore

Feelings of new love and
desire
Ones only the very young usually
experience
With a freshness of joy and
excitement

Excitement of the awareness of
new passion
Desires being awakened from
where we
thought we had left them to die
long ago

These treasures discovered from
true love
The passions not only physical, but
from inside
Deep, emotional, spiritual, from our
inner beings

[This message has been edited by garysgirl (12-30-2003 07:10 PM).]

inkedgoddess
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-19

Posts 7392
Ohio

1 posted 2003-12-30 12:05 PM

beautiful as new snow drizzling down from the heavens
happy new year ethel

garysgirl

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since 2002-09-29

Posts 19237
Florida, USA

2 posted 2003-12-30 12:11 PM

Thank you, Michele!!

Happy New Year to you, too!!
Hugs,

Ethel

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

3 posted 2003-12-30 12:14 PM

you certainly have a way with love

Ericc
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since 2003-01-31

Posts 4178

4 posted 2003-12-30 06:35 PM

Beautiful!

Eric

Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

5 posted 2003-12-30 07:20 PM

Nobody writes romance like you Ethel!
Wonderful write...
A very Happy New Year to you and Gary!
~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~

In the midst of winter..
I found there lives within me,
an invincible summer.

Goodknight
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since 2002-06-15

Posts 2386
Ohio, USA

6 posted 2003-12-30 07:23 PM

beautifully done - very romantic - loved it - paul

vandana

Member Patricius

since 1999-10-22

Posts 10463
USA

7 posted 2003-12-30 08:08 PM

happy new year

enjoyed this

Mistletoe Angel

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since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

8 posted 2004-01-11 08:14 PM

(smiles) Yay! Oh Ethel, this is soooooooo beautiful, sweet friend, and may these feelings always fill your heart with joy and ecstasy as spiritual love is always the most true love, God Bless You, now to go find Part II, yay, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Ethel, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"You'll find something that's enough to keep you
But if the bright lights don't receive you
You should turn yourself around and come back home" MB20

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