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Ericc Member Elite
since 2003-01-31
Posts 4178 |
In the absence of flesh would we cease in our desire? Only our bones know for certain. And they...simply tremble in reply. |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Eric...and when the bones cease tremble, the soul still shines. As always you capture a feeling in so few words and I shake my head and wonder how you do that. Such talent you have! |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Martie took my words. You ARE poetry in emotion! |
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Alicat Member Elite
since 1999-05-23
Posts 4094Coastal Texas |
Very succinct yet eloquent by the same measure. Nice one! |
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1slick_lady Member Ascendant
since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088standing on a shadow's lace |
yes eric...you do rattle a few bones...in us all...h |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Dear Eric, this makes me smile ... the image of rattling bones, but quite certainly desire is recorded into our very depth, past the bones, every component of us will forever know. And at the end of our process of transformation .... the song of desire will still echo ... I love you. Margherita  |
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KoKo Senior Member
since 2003-02-15
Posts 995Inside the shadow's shadow |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
   (smiles) Awwwwwwww, this made me cry thinking how a loves eternal voice still shines even when the body worn around it has passed, sweet friend, God Bless You, you are a true romantic, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Eric, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "You'll find something that's enough to keep you |
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cinnamongirl Member
since 2003-02-02
Posts 217 |
Simply amazing... so well-written, so beautifully said. You are incredible. Wow. I love you, Moca |
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jaicie114 Senior Member
since 2003-09-27
Posts 750On the edge of forever |
Dear One... I do believe that Margherita summed it all up pretty well...trembling bones can only lead to a quaking soul which will always resonate to the song of inifinity's call...and, to those it knows as lovers. Thank you for this... Love and Light...jc This I know as Truth...we are all Beings of Light. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
EXQUISITE!! ~Let peace begin with me... |
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