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Changes in a Life |
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ParisGrl Senior Member
since 2000-06-01
Posts 610 |
You called me on Thursday, I almost did not pick up You and I are no more but I don't why I listened to what you had to say You came straight out and told me "Laura, I have a brain tumor." but what more do you want me to do You lied to me, I never belonged with you Yes I cried although I don't know why maybe its because of the "good heart" I'm told I have I know the next call I get about you, may be about your death It is said that karma goes around maybe you're getting yours....I don't know but I won't be around to watch you go |
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Jes Member
since 2003-10-21
Posts 422Denmark |
Strong feelings from inside and deep down, but though it felt like you made up your decission. Kepp that heart of yours. Smile Jes |
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Ratleader
since 2003-01-23
Posts 7026Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass |
Damn. What a blow, and it hits everyone, right out to the remotest acquaintence. I hope you're able to help after all, and that you find it within yourself to want to. Meanwhile, you've written a very solid and introspective poem from it, a small but meaningful salvage from something awful. ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸ ¸¸ºº> ~~~(¸¸ER¸¸ºº> |
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Aimster Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297Charlotte, NC |
Laura- powerful write and quite harsh, but good to see you are releasing your feelings! keep writing, it allows us to begin to heal. take care amy "love is like a butterfly-- |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
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