navwin » Archives » Open Poetry #30 » Earth's Angel
Open Poetry #30
Post A Reply Post New Topic Earth's Angel Go to Previous / Newer Topic Back to Topic List Go to Next / Older Topic
Poweranimals
New Member
since 2003-12-22
Posts 3


0 posted 2003-12-22 02:57 AM


-Earth's Angel
A glimpse into your eyes hold the fire of my heart.
Why is it such pain I feel when we are apart?
When I see your face, my heart begins to race.
Like waters overflowing, by you my heart longs to be embraced.
But your love is just a dream, as your beauty is without measure.
For, your friendship, I will forever treasure.
Perhaps my love, you may never know.
But I can only hope that in my eyes it shows.
To risk my heart for what might not be.
Why don't I try, for hope you'll see?
Perhaps, for now, ignorance is bliss.
Hoping and waiting for true love's first kiss.
I hope someday to win your love.
You're like an angel from above.
Forever in my heart.. I love you.

© Copyright 2003 Poweranimals - All Rights Reserved
serenities_blood
Member
since 2003-12-21
Posts 56
New Zealand
1 posted 2003-12-22 03:04 AM


I can see so much emotion in there.
I hope that who ever you wrote that for reads it and falls for you instantly. Good luck and WELL DONE!
I like your work.

xoxLORxox

garysgirl
Deputy Moderator 10 ToursDeputy Moderator 5 ToursDeputy Moderator 1 Tour
Member Laureate
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237
Florida, USA
2 posted 2003-12-22 03:16 AM


This is such a beautiful and loving poem
I also hope the intended sees it.
Thanks for sharing your heart.
Hugs  
Ethel

Mysteria
Deputy Moderator 10 ToursDeputy Moderator 10 ToursDeputy Moderator 10 ToursDeputy Moderator 10 ToursDeputy Moderator 1 TourDeputy Moderator 1 TourDeputy Moderator 1 Tour
Member Laureate
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328
British Columbia, Canada
3 posted 2003-12-22 03:19 AM




This truly is a bittersweet ache isn't it>  The one good thing is that friends first, lovers next, is sure a good combination for that forever love.  So nicely written for your first posting.  Good luck and I do hope one day this person sees this.  Happy Holidays to you, and welcome to the family of Passions.

Happy Holidays                    
Let there be peace on earth,
and let it begin w

passing shadows
Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577
displaced
4 posted 2003-12-22 05:04 AM


Welcome to Passions
A Romantic Heart
Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-03
Posts 5496
Forever In Your Heart
5 posted 2003-12-22 05:22 AM


Its always nice for friendship to bloom into love...isn't it....I take from your name you like animals....and angels...

You should read about them sometime, there are great books on the topic of angels...by your poem, it seems as though you have already read up on them....

Welcome to Passions...I am sure she will like it! There is no other honor than to have poems written just for you....I should know I have had one-hundred....great presents from ones heart!

Hope to see more of your poems....

~ARH


Greeneyes
Deputy Moderator 50 ToursDeputy Moderator 10 ToursDeputy Moderator 1 TourDeputy Moderator 1 TourDeputy Moderator 1 Tour
Member Rara Avis
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903
In Your Poetic Mind
6 posted 2003-12-22 09:35 AM


Hi, and Welcome to Passions.  We are glad you have joined our circle of friends, and family….

please check your email for a special greeting


Kindly

Greeneyes~

~~**~~**~~**~~**~~
May the miracle of
Christmas touch your
life with special blessing

H A P P Y  H O L I D A Y S

Poweranimals
New Member
since 2003-12-22
Posts 3

7 posted 2003-12-22 02:13 PM


Thanks guys. I'm glad you liked it. I hope she likes it too, if I ever find the courage to show her.

[This message has been edited by Poweranimals (12-22-2003 02:49 PM).]

ThisDiamond
Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353
Michigan, USA
8 posted 2003-12-22 06:20 PM


I have been thinking about this all day...and glad I can finally reply.
Welcome to Passions...
The bravest poetry pours right from the heart...

Live your dreams.
ThisDiamond

Seymour Tabin
Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla
9 posted 2003-12-22 07:09 PM


Poweranimals
Welcome and enjoyed your write.

Snowflake From Hell
Senior Member
since 2003-07-10
Posts 777
My own little Icey Oblivion
10 posted 2003-12-22 07:17 PM


nicely done...enjoyed it :-)

RE-FUSE-TO COMPLY WE'RE TRYIN TO DO THIS OUR OWN WAY and now I'm watchin the fallen stars surroundin me 15 minutes of fame -SKINLAB-

ThisDiamond
Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353
Michigan, USA
11 posted 2003-12-23 06:46 PM


Bump!

Merry Christmas to you and your angel.
TD

vandana
Deputy Moderator 5 Tours
Member Patricius
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463
USA
12 posted 2003-12-23 06:47 PM


welcome to passions enjoy your read
JamesMichael
Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA
13 posted 2003-12-23 07:18 PM


A passionate post...James
Post A Reply Post New Topic ⇧ top of page ⇧ Go to Previous / Newer Topic Back to Topic List Go to Next / Older Topic
All times are ET (US). All dates are in Year-Month-Day format.
navwin » Archives » Open Poetry #30 » Earth's Angel

Passions in Poetry | pipTalk Home Page | Main Poetry Forums | 100 Best Poems

How to Join | Member's Area / Help | Private Library | Search | Contact Us | Login
Discussion | Tech Talk | Archives | Sanctuary