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green_itchy_stuff
Senior Member

since 2003-06-26

Posts 1929
New Caney, Tx

0 posted 2003-12-19 12:00 PM

There is another light to guide the source
Lead and metal and thunderous sound
Death monarch and the one who knows
Is a watch person that is proven with show

Fallen once and set aflame
Human being is just a name
I raise the rotten from my core
Instance of shinning clearer clear
Harmful the bruise and evil sore
Electric the sound of violence near

Mysterious beckoning, the future awaits
Hopes from here this cave of secrecy
His delicate mind, proves his soul
Always female and discoordinate sacred make believe

Fallen once and set aflame
Human being is just a name
I raise the torch from my side
Brighter and brighter what I see
Splinters hope engrained and hide
They all pretend its phobic free

Night, the time of infrequent thoughts
Message of reversal, cleansing my ways
Scorpian trade of bit by bit, change
Work sober, strain, struggle, empty emotional peak

Interlock the chain of random suggestion
Mush and goo
Control
Blurry focal point remembers me

Trust and open the path
The way to restless struggle and
purest happieness, love, gifts, caring, protection, a sense of completion, unbroken flesh, another side of an otherwise deadgrip locked constant world of jail and bars

garysgirl

Member Laureate

since 2002-09-29

Posts 19237
Florida, USA

1 posted 2003-12-19 03:36 AM

Craig, this is a very interesting poem,
with a lot of levels to it.
I enjoyed reading it.
Hugs,

green_itchy_stuff
Senior Member

since 2003-06-26

Posts 1929
New Caney, Tx

2 posted 2003-12-20 02:09 AM

Thank you gg.

GIS

Application of knowledge is the basis of ability.

[If I can't have everything well then just give me a taste.]-Trent Reznor

River
Senior Member

since 2003-09-16

Posts 627
my own little world

3 posted 2003-12-23 12:30 PM

Mush and Goo. that's the best line, lol. seriusly this is a good write, you had a lot to say here =) later goo-vy dude. =).

- Bonnie Sue

Love hurts as bad as it feels good.

green_itchy_stuff
Senior Member

since 2003-06-26

Posts 1929
New Caney, Tx

4 posted 2003-12-23 09:22 PM

thanx River

GIS

Application of knowledge is the basis of ability.

[If I can't have everything well then just give me a taste.]-Trent Reznor

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