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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla 
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Vapors Hoary vapors wield my eyes A slice of purgatory pie I fork within the muddles wedge And Spoon damnations wrath of dredge And down it slides with filigree A sip, a bite of endorsee Filling me with rushes wave The spirit of a phantoms rave I roar in thunder turning bold With lightening flashes silver cold Ream the fires white-hot heat And pump the bellows in repeat It is a dragon’s hoary cry Letting tears of mournful sigh Raining ire leak the mist Filled with fires trace and twist Cutting free the chains of wrath To melt within the acid bath |
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Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Good morning, Sy..it's good to hear you roar!  |
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scorpio Member Ascendant
since 2002-10-02
Posts 5178right...there |
A defiant write, Sy. And packed with energy!! believe in what your heart feels... |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Wow Sy! You must refrain from putting that hot tabasco sauce on your food! LOL. Tea's on with a little bit of holiday spirit in it.  ~Morning hugs~ ~Let peace begin with me... |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
Hoary vapors wield my eyes A slice of purgatory pie I fork within the muddles wedge And Spoon damnations wrath of dredge ==================== So its "purgatory pie" thats causing all this huh? I thought Randy got into the chips and beer again LOL  ~~~  my goodness...methinks Randy needs some Christmas cookies to soothe all these belly fires hes ragin on the page! and maybe some *winkies* too *L*    I can remember Forever December, |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
High five to ya this morning, Mr Sy! A very good write, but I really wish you'd stay away from those hot jalopeanya peppers! While reading this, I couldn't help think that I was hearing Vincent Price's voice speaking through your words. Excellent as always...very much enjoy your integrity Awesome!  |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Another seconds on the chili bowl, Sy? Well done, Sir! |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
roar away Sy....lol...nicely done sir. Morning hugs to you. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Martie Thank you sweet. scorpio, Hope you enjoyed. Nancy, Thanks for the WOW be right there for tea. JM, Mostly winkies, LOL WWRS LeeJ, And a high five back to you, Thank you for the lovely reply. Sunshine, Thats what you get for taking seconds. Hugs Gentle Spirit, Hugs back sweety. |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Seymour~ MUCHLY enjoyed the roar~ *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost, |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Marge, Thank you love and a happy holiday to you. |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
More! Thor! Thunder & Roar!  ~ Wow, you almost blew me over with your pumping bellows! ~ and I kinda liked it! lol EA |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Earth Angel, In reality he wouldn't hurt a fly. LOL |
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Goodknight Member Elite
since 2002-06-15
Posts 2386Ohio, USA |
a very high quality roar - I enjoyed your poem a lot - Paul |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Thank you Paul and a Happy Holiday. |
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Balladeer
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
I KNEW Isabel's cooking would lead to this finally!!  Nice slice of life, Sy  |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Balladeer So if you knew it why didn't you warn me. Some friend you are. LOL |
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