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mytuesdaywishes
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since 2003-09-05
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a voice from the musicbox

0 posted 2003-12-16 04:47 PM


the cars are still moving right through
this haven of broken-down days
the wind is still speaking of you
with its stories to tell.

tragedy won't find me now
i'll recall your face somehow
and leave it where i left it long ago

your windows will slowly corrode and lose light
from the coals i took ages to rage
the kerosine you lent me to burn up the sky
lasted a day or so.

the streaks on the mirror, this bottle of snow,
people we pass on the street.
we meet up every morning to smile
exchange hurt for awhile.

this year will pass us by
forgetting who, forgetting why
we'll leave it where we left it long ago

the ways we touched this place will be lost
in the pieces we dropped here
a pillow, some lyrics, this internal frost,
i'll have a lonely new year.
your words fitting mine so tight
my dreams dismantling the night,
and every rehabilitation of ourselves.

i stand on faulty limbs
try not to make you my crutch again
i'll leave you where i left you long ago

joy has its own justice. and dreams are languid and lawless. and everything bows to beauty, when it's fierce and when it's flawless...

© Copyright 2003 Rachael - All Rights Reserved
JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16
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1 posted 2003-12-16 10:49 PM


Enjoyed...James
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2 posted 2003-12-17 04:01 PM


I like this melancholy write very much. *S*
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