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Bill Charles
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0 posted 2003-11-24 06:52 PM


“RAINDROPS AND RAINBOWS”
by
Bill Charles
~~~~
When clouds turn to swirls of misty grey,
and they fill their bosom with fullness,
gentle showers fall softly in evening rain,
and colors fill the sky with tenderness…

Midnight is in passions taste with its touch,
your embrace is of warmth this night,
sprinkles fall, yet we dance in meadow’s green,
to all the rhythms of falling delight…

In mornings rise of dawn when sun begins,
I see your eyes sparkle in their afterglow,
a gentle kiss meets mine in softness of lips,
and they caress under raindrops and rainbows…
~~~~

© Copyright 2003 Bill Charles - All Rights Reserved
ctowen
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1 posted 2003-11-24 07:51 PM


I tried standing under a rainbow once ...
      ... still got rained on!

        but it was refreshing!!!  lol

    Good write Bill.

Nightshade
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2 posted 2003-11-24 08:27 PM


Hi Bill!! I've missed your romantic writes. This is lovely. hugs, Chris

"At the touch of love everyone becomes a poet."
-Plato



    

Varuch Elohim
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3 posted 2003-11-24 09:08 PM


Very romantic....enjoyed very much and look forward to reading more of your work. Thanks

Varuch Elohim

Earth Angel
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4 posted 2003-11-24 09:15 PM


Kisses and caresses under raindrops and rainbows ~ Now that is a lovely way to start a day!...Good morning! tehe

Thanks, I needed that! lol


EA

steavenr
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5 posted 2003-11-24 09:48 PM


Raindrops and rainbows...These are a few of my favorite things

Beautiful imagery. Great read.

Margherita
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6 posted 2003-11-25 04:28 AM


Oh Bill here you are with your delicate and romantic touch. This poem conveys beautiful images and feelings.

yet we dance in meadow’s green …. sigh, yes!

Love, Margherita

Aimster
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7 posted 2003-11-25 09:11 AM


Bill-

this is so lovely and romantic.
i've missed your writing, it always
leaves me with smiles upon my heart
thank you kind sir.
take care.
amy

"love is like a butterfly--
if you chase it,
it will surely fly away,instead
hold it close and watch it grow into
something beautiful"
~me~

NewEnglandlazurlu
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8 posted 2003-11-25 09:32 AM


Hi BC ... missed you lots and glad to see you back here.

Two of my most favorite things, raindrops and rainbows. Thanks for writing this, I enjoyed it so much.

Hope all is well with you.
Hugs, Marti

'You cannot shake hands with a clenched fist.'  
PEACE!!!
Indira Gandhi

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9 posted 2003-11-25 10:01 AM


BillCharles~
Just a little Florida *sigh* at the beauty of your thoughts~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram
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LeeJ
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10 posted 2003-11-25 11:13 AM


Midnight is in passions taste with its touch,
your embrace is of warmth this night,
sprinkles fall, yet we dance in meadow’s green,
to all the rhythms of falling delight…

Beautifully written and expressed, thank you Bill, enjoyed reading this soft and lovely write.  

Enchantress
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11 posted 2003-11-25 11:45 AM


Love this one Bill...very nice indeed.
Hugs~

~I've loved you forever, in lifetimes before~

passing shadows
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12 posted 2003-11-25 12:39 PM


ah BC....only you can do it like this

missed you

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13 posted 2003-11-28 06:16 PM




(smiles) Yay! God Bless You, sweet friend, I have missed your gorgeous poetry sooooooo much and am so happy to read it again! (big hugggsssssss) You grace these pages with warm smiles of rainbows, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Bill, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

I don't need no proof when it comes to God and truth
I can see the sun set and I perceive

***Live***

BloomingRose
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14 posted 2003-11-28 07:38 PM


a gentle kiss meets mine in softness of lips,
and they caress under raindrops and rainbows
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

Love the romance in you!

Deb

Patricia
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Missouri
15 posted 2003-11-28 09:52 PM


Bill,
I was thinking about you today and how much I have missed reading your lovely verses.  Imagine my delight, when I dived into these pages of blue and you were here on the cover page!  

This was absolutely beautiful!  Makes me feel like falling in love again...something I don't think of very often.

So, so glad to see you again, my friend.

Patricia

Suetang
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Melbourne, Australia
16 posted 2003-11-28 10:40 PM


Hello Bill

It is so nice to once again read your beautiful words of love.

Take care......Sue

I am in motion
I am blue
Love is an ocean
I'm anchored in you
- Shawn Mullins

garysgirl
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17 posted 2003-11-28 11:00 PM


Midnight is in passions taste with its touch,
your embrace is of warmth this night,
sprinkles fall, yet we dance in meadow’s green,
to all the rhythms of falling delight…


Beautiful, Bill. It's good to see you back!!  
Hugs  
Ethel


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18 posted 2003-11-28 11:04 PM


Midnight is in passions taste with its touch''''
so romantic!
sigh

Lauren~

I had a dream last night
you came to me on silver wings of light
I flew away with you in painted sky
Was it real
Is it what you see,touch or feel

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