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BluesSerenade
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By the Seaside

0 posted 2003-12-16 12:32 PM



*~*~*

These days and other days gone by
take me back and tuck me in
settling down by the fire
keeping still by my side
remembering you.

Once upon a time
I was sure I saw reindeer fly
a reincarnation of my childhood dreams
replaying my today's
journeys all the way back again.

Rewinding memories
transfers from real to reel
kept close for safe keeping
much like a poem
written forever and always~

*~*~*

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1 posted 2003-12-16 12:52 PM


Blue's a happy color too... you just proved it!

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Honeybunch
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2 posted 2003-12-16 01:04 AM


Yes, indeed, Bluesy.  Whatever is, is always and forever.
BluesSerenade
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3 posted 2003-12-16 01:05 AM


Hey, you just proved me right big guy,
I be a happy bluesy tonight!!
It's really not that uncommom,
once I commit to going with the flow.  

Oh but it's so hard for a gal to commit...lol~
Hugs and all that good stuff in your stocking.

BluesSerenade
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4 posted 2003-12-16 01:14 AM


Helen!!  I was just thinking about you, and how I missed your Sunday story,  yesterday.  

Thank you for being here for me.

I wish you peace and much love in the New Year~  

Bunches of hugs, honey~  

iliana
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5 posted 2003-12-16 01:21 AM


Bluesy, I'll say it again -- I really like your style.  Especially, the way you said so much with so little, here:
"Rewinding memories
transfers from real to reel
kept close for safe keeping
much like a poem
written forever and always"~


Jason Lyle
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6 posted 2003-12-16 01:23 AM


I enjoyed this Bluesy.As always.

Jason

BluesSerenade
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7 posted 2003-12-16 01:52 AM


iliana~ Thank you for being so gracious to me with your replies.  Hugs~

Oh Jason~  I appeciate that, very much!

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8 posted 2003-12-16 02:27 AM


Once upon a time
I was sure I saw reindeer fly .....


me too! and tonight, I think I'm seeing them again!
is that because I drank TWO glasses of wine?????????????

BluesSerenade
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9 posted 2003-12-16 02:34 AM


Funny you, those days were so real and true.....when we were drinking 7 up, before
we poisoned our brains,  and never dreamed of sleeping in on Christmas morning!!


Thanks Kacy~

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10 posted 2003-12-16 02:53 AM


nice warm thoughts of bygone days.  Thanks for helping us remember...
passing shadows
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11 posted 2003-12-16 03:46 AM


what would we do without memories?
Aimster
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12 posted 2003-12-16 08:41 AM


"Rewinding memories
transfers from real to reel
kept close for safe keeping
much like a poem
written forever and always~"


you pen this perfectly
sweet friend, as always your
words amaze me.

happy holidays,

amy

"love is like a butterfly--
if you chase it,
it will surely fly away,instead
hold it close and watch it grow into
something beautiful"
~me~

Gentle Spirit
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13 posted 2003-12-16 08:45 AM


These days and other days gone by
take me back and tuck me in
settling down by the fire
keeping still by my side
remembering you.

Only you Lori, can bring such warmth to words....Love this hon.  The happiest and safest of holidays to you filled with peace and love.  HUGS

Kahlil
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14 posted 2003-12-16 08:48 AM


Memories, wonderfully penned...  ~K~
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15 posted 2003-12-17 03:43 PM


Ah, Bluesy one... I like this very much! *S*
scorpio
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16 posted 2003-12-17 04:21 PM


Memories stored in the mind are always readily available.  Much enjoyed, Lori.

believe in what your heart feels...

BluesSerenade
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17 posted 2003-12-17 08:39 PM


Thank you sincerely~
I wish you all a very Merry Holiday!!!

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