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Open Poetry #30
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Keth
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since 2003-11-10
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0 posted 2003-12-15 07:22 AM



It's only me
Scars and dreams
Lit by moonlight
Buried in footsteps
Behind me

It's only time
Past ends now
Now never ends
Forgotten in moments
Behind me

It's only life
Oblivion awaits me
Stroking me patiently
Sleeping in words
Behind me.

© Copyright 2003 Matthias - All Rights Reserved
satin water passion
Junior Member
since 2003-12-14
Posts 12
Following the moon
1 posted 2003-12-15 07:52 AM


This poem has a nice feeling to it. It gives me a picture of a young person frustratedly running away, trying to escape his/her own thoughts.

peace
Andrew

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA
2 posted 2004-11-19 11:38 PM


Enjoyed...James
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