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She asks her patron |
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bsquirrel
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855
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She said Why wander the sky when you can walk the streets? Really, what have the clouds seen that I have not? I know of stars, of the sun, of the moon and of secrets. So why wander the sky when you can walk the streets? |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Haunting..sad..excellent write Mike! Why indeed?!! Hugs~ ~I've loved you forever, in lifetimes before~ |
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bsquirrel
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855 |
Thank you, Enchantress. Sad 'n haunting seem to be themes I excel at. I've given up trying to fight them off. *wink* .m. |
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PseudoPoet Junior Member
since 2003-11-23
Posts 18 |
Ah, inevitable questioning... Beautiful write. |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
I, for one, am glad you're not fighting it anymore... it is what you excel at... do it again. |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Excellent Mikey. I always enjoy your writes. Chris  "At the touch of love everyone becomes a poet." |
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Temptress
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-06-15
Posts 7136Mobile, AL |
its not about wandering the sky...its about the ability to do it...to fly... umm..I REALLY wasn't trying for a rhyming reply...lol...a bit corny now I guess? a good question though. enjoyed I LOVE YOU! I LOVE YOU! I LOVE YOU! |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
gawd! I'm always in awe of you |
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wranx Member Elite
since 2002-06-07
Posts 3689Moved from a shack to a barn |
I believe you just answered her. |
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bsquirrel
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855 |
Thanks, guys. |
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xmutexelationx Junior Member
since 2003-05-16
Posts 15AmongstTheCharredFieldsOfSnow |
Hi Mike . It's Sara (PoeticGoddessOfDepression) It's been a while, but I'm back at Passions. I thought I'd check up on a couple people before I actually got around to posting anything. I'm glad to see you're still posting. I've always admired the style in which you write.. along with lots of others here. But I agree with Enchantress- very huanting.Take care, [sara] [This message has been edited by xmutexelationx (11-26-2003 09:09 PM).] |
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bsquirrel
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855 |
Great to see you again, Sara. Uh huh, I'm postin' here off and on. Thanks for readin', and hope you have a happy Thanksgiving (and start postin' again soon). Mike |
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