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Open Poetry #30

Happiness

Master
Senior Member

since 1999-08-18

Posts 1867
Boston, MA

0 posted 2003-12-14 01:43 PM

Again, with happiness, I’m drunk,
As though a kid fixing my stare
Upon the nightgown that you flung
So carelessly unto the chair.

Yes, there is beauty everywhere,
Outside of poems, ink-stained papers.
I’ll make you see it! I don’t care
If we awake the sleeping neighbors.

Check out my poetry here:

http://www.unknownpoets.com/db/authors/master

Snow

Senior Member

since 2000-10-16

Posts 1170
desert flower looking for rain

1 posted 2003-12-14 01:57 PM

very nice, i really enjoyed every moment of this ..

snow

"...why does my skeleton pursue me
if my soul has fallen away?"
~p.neruda

BluesSerenade
Member Patricius

since 2001-10-23

Posts 10549
By the Seaside

2 posted 2003-12-15 11:08 PM

Liked the nightgown she flung,
and the beauty everywhere outside of poems.

Oh boy, there you go!!!

Thank you, thank you~

Ericc
Member Elite

since 2003-01-31

Posts 4178

3 posted 2003-12-16 10:11 AM

Great write!

Eric

Michelle_loves_Mike

Senior Member

since 2003-12-20

Posts 1189
Pennsylvania

4 posted 2003-12-21 05:11 PM

very good read, makes us all remember the nightgown that was flung,,,or we flung ourselves
Michelle

I wish all could find the true happiness I have found,,in the eyes of Mike

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