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Hockeychick19
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0 posted 2003-11-24 03:15 PM


Save Me

Won’t someone take away this pain?
With it I have nothing to gain,
I always seem to be ill,
In so way, shape, or form,
Why can’t I just be normal?

Lord help me,
Save me.

I cry through sleepless nights,
Wellness is so close,
But I can’t quite reach it,
Angels raise me to new heights,
In their healing hands I fit,
But I can’t hold my grip.

Lord help me,
Save me.

Life is a gift so live it to the fullest!

© Copyright 2003 Kelly Gambon - All Rights Reserved
Brad Majors
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1 posted 2003-11-24 03:16 PM


nicely done
Hockeychick19
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2 posted 2003-11-24 03:51 PM


Thank you Brad.

~Kelly~

Life is a gift so live it to the fullest!

Margherita
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3 posted 2003-11-25 03:46 AM


This is a beautiful heartfelt prayer-poem.
Amen.
Thank you.
Love, Margherita

Margherita
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4 posted 2003-11-25 03:48 AM


[This message has been edited by Margherita (11-25-2003 03:49 AM).]

GG
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5 posted 2003-11-25 03:50 AM


I have prayed a smiliar prayer many times...
and though I've not reached any physical healing, I know that He holds my hand, and will use it for good... somehow, as long as I love Him.
This is beautiful. I'll pray His will for you.
Where two or more are gathered..

Always, Alyssa

He was a man of sorrows
...I am a girl of tears.
(Blink, Breathe, Stand, Fight)

Aimster
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6 posted 2003-11-25 09:13 AM


He will hear you, of that I am sure. This
was such a touching and beautiful poem
crying out for help. Just keep believing
in yourself and Him and you will find your
way. I know that it is hard, and there
will be times you will feel lost, but I
truly believe we are never given more than
we can handle. Take care.
Amy

"love is like a butterfly--
if you chase it,
it will surely fly away,instead
hold it close and watch it grow into
something beautiful"
~me~

Hockeychick19
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7 posted 2003-11-25 05:20 PM


Margherita - Thank you... I'm glad you enjoyed it.

Alyssa - I'll keep you in my thoughts and prayers too.

Amy - Thank you for the encouraging words... Bless your heart.

Thank you everyone
*Hugs*
~Kelly~

Life is a gift so live it to the fullest!

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