Open Poetry #30 |
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the ant Junior Member
since 2003-11-30
Posts 18ca, usa |
The atmosphere clear and air was wet Thick swim that day they met Time stood still Shining down brilliance filling my ears I could hardly bare this My eyes were burning my mouth dry, red Holding my arms chased by fear I fell from that dream into a fire it filled my body with passionate desire |
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Greeneyes
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
beautiful, I can really sense the passion in this, nice work... Lauren~ ~~**~~**~~**~~**~~ |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
wow! that's cool! |
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SuperGlueRyan Junior Member
since 2003-06-16
Posts 45Possum Kingdom |
Well done, Capt. Ant! |
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Snow
since 2000-10-16
Posts 1170desert flower looking for rain |
loved how much i could feel this. snow "...why does my skeleton pursue me |
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