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Bill Charles
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0 posted 2003-12-12 05:21 PM


“ONCE AGO IN TIME”
by
Bill Charles
~~~~
When we danced close then in moonlit night,
to guitars strumming in softer breeze,
rhythm’s beat was smooth to subtly flow,
warmth met when we touched to please…

Palms swayed silent, as your hips caressed,
moonbeams shined through mist of dark,
stars danced and sparkled with your eyes,
and your lips touched and left their mark…

We listened to sexy blues floating from wood,
as lovers moved with sense of passions grace,
hearts sighed between beats of rapture’s essence,
once ago in time past was our loving embrace…
~~~~



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1 posted 2003-12-12 06:14 PM


Very beautiful dance here Bill...
loved the verse and flow.
Hugs~

~ Let peace begin with me...    

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2 posted 2003-12-12 06:42 PM


nice read
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3 posted 2003-12-12 06:54 PM


nice to have warm feelings about a long ago
dance still, isnt it?

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4 posted 2003-12-12 07:23 PM


Mmmmm....nice, very nice. hugs, Chris

"At the touch of love everyone becomes a poet."
-Plato



    

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5 posted 2003-12-12 09:43 PM








(big hugggsssssss) This is such a beautiful love poem with a slight melancholy feel to it, dearest friend, may true love shine in your heart forever and last once upon a time and ever after, God Bless You, I am happy to read your poetry again, my troubadour blues friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Bill, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton


"You'll find something that's enough to keep you
But if the bright lights don't receive you
You should turn yourself around and come back home" MB20

[This message has been edited by Mistletoe Angel (12-12-2003 09:43 PM).]

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6 posted 2003-12-13 05:43 AM


you're romantic even when you're sad
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