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1slick_lady
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standing on a shadow's lace

0 posted 2003-10-07 08:19 PM



Silence


you
have become
my poetry
and in
your silence
I am
without words


"wish your room had room for two" John Mayer

© Copyright 2003 Helen Chambers - All Rights Reserved
Susan Caldwell
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1 posted 2003-10-07 08:24 PM


Amen Helen!


Dark Angel
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2 posted 2003-10-07 08:29 PM


Amen indeed!

Keeping it.

Maree

fate is not just
whose cooking  smells good
but which way the wind blows

(Ani DiFranco)


vlraynes
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3 posted 2003-10-07 08:36 PM



Ooooooh...love this, Helen...

When the power of love overcomes the
love of power the world will know peace.
-Jimi Hendrix

alisa
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4 posted 2003-10-07 08:53 PM


wonderful...

ctowen
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5 posted 2003-10-08 12:39 PM


... and such words speak

          V O L U M E S !!!


            

      

HopeS
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6 posted 2003-10-08 12:42 PM


Oh this is so true , it the same as saying
" I am lost without you "
Hope

Logan
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7 posted 2003-10-08 12:42 PM


And in a few words, you have said volumes, Helen...very nicely done...very gentle smile
Finalinsomnia
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8 posted 2003-10-08 01:09 AM


Short and Sweet.
SharaRose
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9 posted 2003-10-08 03:52 AM


Silence hurts.

Love,
Terri~

Of sound, and speech let all lift the hearer!

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10 posted 2003-10-08 10:05 PM


But silence can be utterly eloquent...as we short-line poets know so well....

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Martie
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11 posted 2003-10-08 10:18 PM


Helen...So true and beautifully said!
Mistletoe Angel
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12 posted 2003-10-08 10:25 PM




(smiles) Oh Helen, this is beautiful, sweet friend, silence can be a pretty thing sometimes and when crystal tears fall is one moment! (kiss on cheek) God Bless You, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Helen, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

I don't need no proof when it comes to God and truth
I can see the sun set and I perceive

***Live***

suthern
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13 posted 2003-10-09 09:36 AM


Yes... and you wrote it perfectly. *S*
allamericanjoe
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14 posted 2003-10-09 09:39 AM


very sweet, and deep.

"The greatest gift a father can give to his daughter is to love her mother."

angelblueyes
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15 posted 2003-10-09 09:56 AM


Beautiful.
Crystal

KoKo
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Inside the shadow's shadow
16 posted 2003-10-09 11:23 AM


Saving this!
Jason Lyle
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With my darkling
17 posted 2003-10-09 11:33 AM


Hear the silence so loud. nice write.

Jason

BluesSerenade
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18 posted 2003-10-09 12:48 PM


Love your style Helen, enough said!

Richy
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19 posted 2003-10-09 02:32 PM




Some of the most tender things can be said without saying anything at all...

Sometimes... words just get in the way...


Magical Helen!



icebox
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20 posted 2003-10-09 02:50 PM


Yet you say so much in so few words.
Ceinwyn
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21 posted 2003-10-09 02:51 PM


mind if I save this!?

If at first you don't succeed destroy all the evidence that you tried.

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