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falling into venus
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falling into venus |
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Ceinwyn Member Elite
since 2000-07-09
Posts 2175VA 
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falling into venus ...captivating... grasping onto words clinging in mid-air cryptic intuition hidden behind closed eyes ...hypnotizing... someone's got lead foot my cynicism colliding with your reality Someone stop me before I.... If at first you don't succeed destroy all the evidence that you tried. [This message has been edited by Ceinwyn (10-07-2003 08:19 PM).] |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
this was penetratingly mysticle very much enjoyed |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Nicely done, Dear Ceinwyn! Take care not to let your jaded heart sabotage your relationships. Trust your intuition and you will know whether or not the waters are safe to tread. Loving hugs, Linda |
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bsquirrel
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855 |
I like watching your words twist. |
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garysgirl 
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Someone stop me before I.... Oops, Kristen!! Sounds like you did already!!  Hugs  Ethel |
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Edder Senior Member
since 2003-04-02
Posts 671 |
loved this Kris! |
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gemjop Member Elite
since 2002-11-18
Posts 2587Pencilveinia, USA |
fall, gwon just do it gal. I'll buy you a pint if you get any grazes.  keeping this. ~I wanna live, I wanna give, I've been a miner for a heart of gold~ Neil Young |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
talking of lead foot... a moving body has its own inertia keep on moving and writing... nobody knew from not trying... regards sudhir |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
love the ending!!! Am left in suspense, and there's such an air of mystery wafting around! Great one....~S~ Accept these small gifts from my gypsy heart ~S~ |
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Ceinwyn Member Elite
since 2000-07-09
Posts 2175VA |
 to all...Mikey I'm like the energizer bunny I keep on going and going and going..despite the fact I'm getting sick..blah If at first you don't succeed destroy all the evidence that you tried. |
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