an odd interpretation of...(love?)

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Open Poetry #29

an odd interpretation of...(love?)

pandonov
Member

since 2003-10-03

Posts 478
b/w conscience and insolence

0 posted 2003-10-04 02:51 AM

Reality... different
                       from...

lost sensation sprinkles through
twisting
           turning butterflies

tender-emotions and crossroad-buffer
obsolite-conception and originality

climb above amnesic land
                            splicing.

tiny perception
                 mind-exclamation and
interaction with change-pleasurable.

moment so abstract
                   beyond
the concrete blank
                     unimaginable
as is rectangular triangle...
                             inception.

the slant is horizontal and
                              existent.
I walk through

n2dmystic
Member

since 2003-09-27

Posts 253
beyond the doors of perception

1 posted 2003-10-04 03:01 AM

enjoyed. nice imagery. thank you

Peace, Joe
in the big MT
seeking the serendipitous magical mysteries of life's ubiquitous twisteries

vlraynes
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-07-25

Posts 8229
Somewhere... out there...

2 posted 2003-10-04 03:07 AM

pandonov...I enjoyed this
interpretation very much.
Wonderfully done.
Hugs,
~Vicky
When the power of love overcomes the
love of power the world will know peace.
-Jimi Hendrix

Aenimal
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-18

Posts 7350
the ass-end of space

3 posted 2003-10-04 03:55 AM

excellent writing and welcome to PIP

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

4 posted 2003-11-14 01:51 AM

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