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Eromyna
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since 2002-11-29
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Pheonix, AZ, USA

0 posted 2003-09-22 10:20 AM



To the untouched blood
and the blackened hearts
to the veins that cry
in solitude, dark

To the precious forgotten
who fall to the side
and their tears of remorse
and their hollow insides

To the broken, yet remnant
the weak and unshaken
the proud, yet you mock them
the sadly forsaken

To those who yet suffer
my pity, my heart
To those who are burdened
or falling apart

I wish you the worlds
in their splendor and grace
I wish for your peace
for a haven, a safe place

I wish you the stars
and the light they embue
I wish you an angel
as sweet as Mathiu

"I don't need to scream for you to deem me aggravation."

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QjQ
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since 2003-04-18
Posts 3756
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1 posted 2003-09-22 10:22 AM


I wish you the worlds
in their splendor and grace
I wish for your peace
for a haven, a safe place

enjoyed these lines,,,
very nice write,,,

                                    

Eromyna
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since 2002-11-29
Posts 306
Pheonix, AZ, USA
2 posted 2003-09-22 10:24 AM


good

"I don't need to scream for you to deem me aggravation."

Earth Angel
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since 2002-08-27
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Realms of Light
3 posted 2003-09-22 10:42 AM


I wish that for the world too. You expressed your feelings so eloquently.

Your Mathiu sounds like he really is an angel!

It's good to see you again. Now don't you go leaving us "anymore", eromyna!


EA

angelblueyes
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since 2003-07-19
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4 posted 2003-09-22 12:54 PM


Thisis a tender wish and a joy to the heart.
Crystal

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