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Open Poetry #29

No more chances

Foxyoasis
Senior Member

since 2003-06-10

Posts 974
Atlantic Beach,Fla

0 posted 2003-10-03 06:03 PM

Promises Broken
Tears shed
are love as
we know it
might as well
be dead

You say you care
even though you
like another
you say hang in
there and we will
be with each other

My hear aches
my soul wrenches
from within
the walls of
tommrow are closed
for today

I just want you to
leave and go away
the same old song
the same old dance
you dont want me around
you just keep giving
her another chance.

rkcraig
Member

since 2003-02-27

Posts 202
Cincinnati, Ohio, USA

1 posted 2003-10-03 06:05 PM

wonderful piece of work

The hardest thing to do is watch the one you love, love another.

Foxyoasis
Senior Member

since 2003-06-10

Posts 974
Atlantic Beach,Fla

2 posted 2003-10-03 06:15 PM

Thank you

A Romantic Heart
Member Ascendant

since 1999-09-03

Posts 5496
Forever In Your Heart

3 posted 2003-10-04 02:33 AM

After so many times, so much hurt, your heart runs out of chances!

Thanks~ARH

True poets don't write with the ink of quill or pen, but with the ink of their heart~

n2dmystic
Member

since 2003-09-27

Posts 253
beyond the doors of perception

4 posted 2003-10-04 03:27 AM

wonderfully wistfully sad.

"the walls of
tommrow are closed
for today"

yeah, when you get here, it's like there's a whole new world outside. I hope the process continues to fruition e.g. serenity,

Peace, Joe
in the big MT
seeking the serendipitous magical mysteries of life's ubiquitous twisteries

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