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rkcraig
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0 posted 2003-10-03 05:59 PM


the cosmic proportions of space and time swirl about me
and yet I do not move.
I stand,
but never alone.
always a whisper or subtle
hint of the wind,
reminds me of what could,
and very well,
should have been.

The hardest thing to do is watch the one you love, love another.

© Copyright 2003 James Ian Craig - All Rights Reserved
A Romantic Heart
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Forever In Your Heart
1 posted 2003-10-03 06:24 PM


I read this and had to reply, you have spoken the words from my heart today! Thanks ~ARH

True poets don't write with the ink of quill or pen, but with the ink of their heart~

[This message has been edited by A Romantic Heart (10-03-2003 06:25 PM).]

nakdthoughts
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Between the Lines
2 posted 2003-10-03 06:26 PM


always a whisper or subtle
hint of the wind,
reminds me of what could,
and very well,
should have been.


I know...I have reminders too
*s
M

rkcraig
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Cincinnati, Ohio, USA
3 posted 2003-10-03 07:58 PM


Ahr and nkdthoughts - thank you both so much

The hardest thing to do is watch the one you love, love another.

BluesSerenade
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By the Seaside
4 posted 2003-10-04 04:27 AM


What could have been and should have been.
(according to me)   

I loved the way you stirred this up!
It's nice to read you again~

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Saluting with misty eyes
5 posted 2003-10-04 03:23 PM


What could have been... the absolute saddest words anyone has ever had to think...
I really enjoyed this.

We are all equal but we’re individually different
and able to reach the impossible if we try.

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