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nakdthoughts
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0 posted 2003-10-03 03:14 PM



feed me some drink
not knowing its outcome
but release is inevitable

"Love is not blind - It sees more and not less, but because it sees more, it is willing to see less."
(Will Moss)

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QjQ
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1 posted 2003-10-03 03:18 PM


enjoyed your thoughts ,,,

                                                                    

nakdthoughts
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2 posted 2003-10-03 03:21 PM


well these  thoughts are slipping out...not in my control at the moment
thank you Glenn
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3 posted 2003-10-03 03:24 PM


is this like...
  candy is nice
but serve mine on ice
with twist of lemon or lime
for when I sit here
and think of good cheer
a bit of liquor and soon you'll be mine?



nakdthoughts
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4 posted 2003-10-03 03:28 PM


Yes, yes and yes...


oh, I did tell you that I have two taverns in my town that I had to pass  during my walk..one I passed up the other begged me enter...

[This message has been edited by nakdthoughts (10-03-2003 03:29 PM).]

pandonov
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5 posted 2003-10-03 03:28 PM


hm, somehow seems so true, realy pretty
nakdthoughts
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6 posted 2003-10-03 03:30 PM


oh it's true, one drink and I am someone's...


now where is he


Cpat Hair
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7 posted 2003-10-03 03:30 PM


(chuckling)...
can't remember the last time someone said yes to me....



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8 posted 2003-10-03 03:32 PM


lol.. well you passed up one and begged a stop in the other.. you get too fiesty they'll move us over to MC...


nakdthoughts
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9 posted 2003-10-03 03:47 PM


now wouldn't that be something...me getting too feisty..someone wishes...maybe  
"can't remember the last time someone said yes to me...."  well maybe you asked the wrong person...

j/k  don't want to have anyone whispering about us now..do we?
Me

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10 posted 2003-10-03 04:08 PM


no ma'am... wouldn't want to sully your reputation...

(chuckling) I think it would be who got us kicked over to mature..first thing you know I'd be acting a fool...and say something offensive or too suggestive..
I think they'd hold you above reproach..

nakdthoughts
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11 posted 2003-10-03 04:49 PM


well  I have been reproached before...


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thanks for the smile you placed for me

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12 posted 2003-10-03 04:58 PM


ah..your welcome for the smile... and if I ever get out that way, I now know to look you up and take you out for  a drink..  
lol  just teasing you kid..

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nakdthoughts
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13 posted 2003-10-03 05:56 PM



laughing and laughing and laughing...
and still laughing~~

rkcraig
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14 posted 2003-10-03 06:04 PM


I would have walked in that first tavern
nakdthoughts
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15 posted 2003-10-03 06:24 PM


rkc...I would have, but I have been banned from that one ever since my husband left me forthe barmaid there and she became uncomfortable every time I had to enter to ask him any questions concerning "our life"



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16 posted 2003-10-03 06:29 PM


nice
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