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Marge Tindal

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Florida's Foreverly Shores

0 posted 2003-10-03 10:45 AM

Crystalized Adorn
~*Marge Tindal*~

Jack-Of-Frost sneaks in
Laying crytalized adorn
Across the dawn break~

Sighing Winter's breath
Unexpected arrival
Quilting comes early~

Drape of chilling white
Snuggles the meadow grasses
Appearance snowy~

*Cuz' Ratleader/Ed asked me to*

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram
noles1@totcon.com

[This message has been edited by Marge Tindal (10-03-2003 11:11 AM).]

Martie

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1 posted 2003-10-03 10:56 AM

Marge/sis

There is so much beauty around, I'm glad your have those kind of eyes. Loved this!

inkedgoddess
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2 posted 2003-10-03 10:58 AM

i saw it too for the first time this seasn this morning on the emerald green, a touch of white frost

Gentle Spirit
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3 posted 2003-10-03 10:59 AM

Marge, this is beautiful lady! Love it.

Earth Angel
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Realms of Light

4 posted 2003-10-03 11:01 AM

I love the word "crystalized"! --and your haikus were a fresh breath of crystal splendor. Crisp, cool, refreshing--like a peppermint melting on my tongue...

Crystal Magic,

Linda

Seymour Tabin
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Tamarac Fla

5 posted 2003-10-03 11:02 AM

Marge,
Three lovelies.

Greeneyes

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In Your Poetic Mind

6 posted 2003-10-03 11:03 AM

very lovely.....

Lauren~

There's a song inside my soul
One that I've tried to write over and over again

passing shadows
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displaced

7 posted 2003-10-03 12:25 PM

yes...burrrrrr

Betty
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8 posted 2003-10-04 08:25 AM

Beautiful Marge.
Betty

wayoutwalt
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TEXAS (it's all big)

9 posted 2003-10-04 08:28 AM

how could something so CHILLING warm my heart quite so??? Why its magic MAGIC! heheh yuh its poetry.

suthern

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10 posted 2003-10-08 09:56 AM

This brings shivers of delight... just beautiful! *S*

Kethry
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Victoria Australia

11 posted 2003-10-08 10:09 AM

love the crystal cameos.
Kethry

Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown

Marty Baird
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12 posted 2003-10-08 10:40 AM

Well done

Marge Tindal

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Florida's Foreverly Shores

13 posted 2003-10-08 05:55 PM

Thank you all sooooo much for letting me know you enjoyed this 'early' preview of Winter's kiss~

I so enjoy Haiku/Senryu format ...
I pen a gazillion of them and share but a few~

*sigh*

And if the RascalLeader doesn't come in here, AFTER ASKING FOR M O R E of these from me ... he's gonna get pulverized ... poetically~

*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram
noles1@totcon.com

Ratleader

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Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass

14 posted 2003-10-08 09:34 PM

....sigh....site finally comes back up, and some personal things keep me away for extra days.....

Back at last, hopefully to stay, and these little beauties are the perfect appetizer....

RascalLeader, eh? Well, I'll have you know that I'm very partial to rascals!

~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸ ¸¸ºº> ~~~(¸¸ER¸¸ºº>
______________Ratleader______________

pandonov
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b/w conscience and insolence

15 posted 2003-10-08 09:38 PM

cute

Trillium

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16 posted 2003-10-09 05:27 PM

Dear Marge: Beautifully done and I can feel that frost fairy creeping closer all the time!

Love
Betty Lou

Betty Lou Hebert

Marge Tindal

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Florida's Foreverly Shores

17 posted 2003-10-09 07:34 PM

See how it goes, threaten a man with 'poetic pulverization' and ya' get a reply~

Okie-Dokie, RascalLeader , you've redeemed yourself~
Thankee, sir~

Pandonov~
Thank you for the read and reply~

BettyLou~
I know ... even way down here in the sunny South, we have that early kiss-of-fall touching the meadow~
NOT looking forward to that first frosty morn at all~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram
noles1@totcon.com

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