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Amature2
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0 posted 2003-10-02 09:35 PM



Surrender

I
Concede
The battle with
This thing called loneliness
I can see it is here to stay
No matter what I try
It will be here
To the
End

"Due to budget cuts, the light at the end of the tunnel, has been turned off" author unknown

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KoKo
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Inside the shadow's shadow
1 posted 2003-10-02 09:38 PM


...still can't find the appropriate words to say...i know this...and have felt it very long...so long...but STILL can't find the words...
passing shadows
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displaced
2 posted 2003-10-02 09:41 PM


you aren't the only one who has surrendered
Mistletoe Angel
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3 posted 2003-10-02 10:54 PM




(big hugggssssssss) I certainly hope you don't feel this way, sweet friend, we all feel lonely time and time again but believe in your heart you DESERVE to be happy and make it known you won't be lonely for long! (sigh) I send angel comfort hugs your way, sweet friend, God Bless You, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet friend, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

I don't need no proof when it comes to God and truth
I can see the sun set and I perceive

***Live***

SharaRose
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Somewhere out there~
4 posted 2003-10-03 01:48 AM


If you are conceding, and you surrender the battle..sounds like now you will give peace a chance. That's got to be a good thing!
Love,
Terri~

Of sound, and speech let all lift the hearer!

angelblueyes
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5 posted 2003-10-03 01:52 AM


Maybe now is the time to concede and let your soul rest and be filled with peace.And in the days to come you'll flourish in the wonderment of sharing your life with someone who's truly meant for you.
Crystal

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where the wild flowers grow
6 posted 2003-10-03 02:14 AM


Very sad, my friend..
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