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SharaRose
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Somewhere out there~

0 posted 2003-10-02 02:18 AM



Somehow what I am about to write has almost a prophetic feel
Not sure why it just does.
I feel I'm bound for some other place
Someplace where I can feel things are real.

The tickets, well, I don't know where they will come from maybe some forgotten money left by family long ago.
What I am looking for, where I am going, well I just don't really know.

Somewhere out there that someone with love to share willingly, and free.
You know the one, the one that will see the real me.
They will show me how my eyes can shine through the darkest times
They will teach me, with patience,
and read me 'til my sleepy eyes weep,
and not be angry becasue I cry.
Not yell at me, and ask me why.

And when my step is a little late
They won't mind, they'll just wait
And love me still, in spite of
They will take my hand cover it
warm it like a lovers love.

And when I turn, and look over my shoulder
The touch of their hand will comfort me
To not look back, reminding me just a look, what for?
With just a knowing letting me know I did all I could with my life behind me, already tried but didn't somehow in life win.
With arm draped over my shoulder reminding me
mine wasn't, in this life, an original sin.
Anything I've done has been done before
And then their love, their belief, and faith in me
will open my true self...
The one that's been anchored, too long needing to leave the same old moor.

It's almost as if I can feel their hand now, calling come if it's what you want to do
And the promise of love, yet not spoken of
Still knowing it's there not token
Finding love, one that is true!!!

Finally I find my home in this loves arms not token, but true
Not from hard work, trials of the heart toils,
war torn like a casualty of mens prideful spoils
But just because they wanted to.

Of sound, and speech let all lift the hearer!

© Copyright 2003 Shara - All Rights Reserved
n2dmystic
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beyond the doors of perception
1 posted 2003-10-02 02:36 AM


Shara - you make me think of my one true love, I could talk with her for hours on end, and we knew everything, then I forgot what I was doing... anyway, a very emotionally evocative piece.  may you stay connected, forever.  blessings

Peace, Joe
in the big MT
seeking the serendipitous magical mysteries of life's ubiquitous twisteries

Mistletoe Angel
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2 posted 2003-10-02 03:03 AM




(big hugggssssssss) Oh Shara, I never have felt "true" love yet, but I know deep down with all my heart that some prophecy of love is being bestowed upon me too and He has a plan and I shall soon understand the beauty of all love is for the first time! (sigh) God Bless You, sweet friend, this is a treasure, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Shara, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

I don't need no proof when it comes to God and truth
I can see the sun set and I perceive

***Live***

QjQ
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3 posted 2003-10-02 10:12 AM


enjoyed the write  n  read,,,

                                                                   

Earth Angel
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4 posted 2003-10-02 11:06 AM


SharaRose ~

I want this for you, Dear Sharer of Roses.
--and may it be so.

Loving hugs,
EA

NewEnglandlazurlu
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since 2002-01-04
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A Mountain Paradise
5 posted 2003-10-02 11:14 AM


My hubby and I found true love almost 35 years ago and to this day it remains strong! I know you too will find your soul mate.

This was a very prophetic write sweetie!

Huggles and a smile, Marti

Hear Blessings dropping their blossoms all around you.

SharaRose
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Somewhere out there~
6 posted 2003-10-02 02:19 PM


Thank you to all of you...

n2dmystic--I know the connection thing. That's how I felt about someone in my past. Thanks for reading.

Noah--Noah when it does come your way it will offer itself to you..it won't be hard to do. It will offer itself..you won't have to beg for it. Love loves you back.

QJQ--Thanks Q for always reading me and being there with a word for me.

Earth Angel--EA thank you for wishing me well. God Bless.

NewEnglandlazurlu--You are forunate. Some find love, some do not. Thank GOD everyday for your good fortune, but for the grace of God you could have had my marriage. Contact me and I'll fill you in. I'm sure you would like facts before you make any real thoughts about another persons life you don't know. Believe me you would see things differently.

Love,
Terri~

Of sound, and speech let all lift the hearer!

Saunni
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since 2000-07-11
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West Virginia
7 posted 2003-10-02 11:30 PM


You deserve the very best life has to offer and don't ever take anything less. You have a great heart and best wishes now and always!

Sauni:)The Only Time I See The Sun Is When I'm Within That Vanilla Breeze.The Only Time I'm One With The Sun Is When He Shelters Me From The Rain.

SharaRose
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Somewhere out there~
8 posted 2003-10-03 12:02 PM


:'( Thank you Saunni. I appreciate you.
Love,
Terri~

Of sound, and speech let all lift the hearer!

angelblueyes
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9 posted 2003-10-03 12:18 PM


My sweet friend I have something for you.
You're a lady whos tender and sweet
A greater love noone shall ever meet
One day your love will come along
And your love will be so strong
This person will love you for who you are
And allow you to shine as a bright star
They'll walk with you in time
No matter the pace or the rhyme
They'll be there to support you in any time
And listen intently to your heart's divine
No less should you ever take
For a tender love is what your heart makes

Crystal

allamericanjoe
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10 posted 2003-10-03 12:26 PM


funny thing about true love, you don't always know it when you find it, but it knows you.

[This message has been edited by allamericanjoe (10-03-2003 12:26 AM).]

SharaRose
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Somewhere out there~
11 posted 2003-10-03 12:34 PM


Thank you to both of you...

Angelblueyes-- Thank you Crystal. I appreciate your words of rhtme to encourage.
God Bless you for that.

Allamercanjoe--I will take your word for it. I do know one thing...TRUE love will never strip me of my dignity for it's selfish gain, that much I do know. (Thank You!)

Love,
Terri~

Of sound, and speech let all lift the hearer!

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