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Aenimal
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0 posted 2003-10-02 12:48 PM


uroborus i
have swallowed my fill, when then
does this cycle end?

g'night all

[This message has been edited by Aenimal (10-02-2003 12:52 AM).]

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1 posted 2003-10-02 01:58 AM




(sigh) I'm afraid I am not familiar with "uroborus" yet I enjoy your work ever so much, sweet friend, you are quite versatile and colorful with your expressions, yay, have a wonderful evening, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Raphael, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

I don't need no proof when it comes to God and truth
I can see the sun set and I perceive

***Live***

n2dmystic
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2 posted 2003-10-02 03:17 AM


and good nite to you, dear Aenimal ~ sweet dreams and such

Peace, Joe
in the big MT
seeking the serendipitous magical mysteries of life's ubiquitous twisteries

Kaoru
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3 posted 2003-10-03 02:51 AM


Wow, Raph... how did you let this slip by me? I love it.
Dark Angel
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4 posted 2003-10-03 06:06 AM


Perhaps never Bello.

Alot to ponder here m'friend.

A great write.. as always

Maree.

fate is not just
whose cooking  smells good
but which way the wind blows

(Ani DiFranco)


vlraynes
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5 posted 2003-10-04 06:20 AM



Yes...one to ponder, indeed...

Enjoyed this, Raph...

When the power of love overcomes the
love of power the world will know peace.
-Jimi Hendrix

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6 posted 2003-10-04 12:21 PM


enjoyed
Wind
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7 posted 2003-10-04 01:04 PM


I don't know
ask me later

hello all

And the angel said unto me, "These are the cries of the carrots, the cries of the carrots!"
-Tool

pandonov
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8 posted 2003-10-04 02:12 PM


awesome, you write, beautiful maybe is not the right word
Wind
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9 posted 2003-10-04 02:16 PM


and put your picture back up before I hurt you

for halloween...so you can scare them

and...i do lava yer poem

very too much

And the angel said unto me, "These are the cries of the carrots, the cries of the carrots!"
-Tool

Aenimal
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10 posted 2003-10-04 05:26 PM


Thanks everybody. The uroborus is an ancient symbol of a serpent devouring itself. the circular symbol represents eternity and the cycles of life/nature
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11 posted 2003-10-09 12:55 PM



The cycle ends, only to begin again,
once you've passed go!  

angelblueyes
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12 posted 2003-10-09 01:50 AM


This is good.You are very creative in your writes and I love it.
Crystal

Jason Lyle
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13 posted 2003-10-09 11:52 AM


I don't think the cycle ever ends, great write, as always.

Jason

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14 posted 2003-10-09 11:58 AM


(laughing)

I've told you already..... it doesn't...

very nicely done...

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15 posted 2003-10-09 08:26 PM


ok mr. "I read the dictionary in my spare time."

heh...where the heck are you?

What about China? Have you seen the Great Wall?
All walls are great, if the roof doesn't fall.
-yorke/bjork

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16 posted 2003-10-09 08:45 PM


Yes, the head eats the tail....devouring
all....and only then the cycle ends.  Thanx
Raph for a tidbit of trivia...

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