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Ku'uipo
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since 2003-09-25
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0 posted 2003-10-01 10:46 PM



His hair stirs with the touch of his breath
Tender lips lie slightly ajar
Watching while images pass through his head
I still daydream of the dreams of my love
The pillow he cradles in a childlike way
Innocence shone through
I want to capture his sleep
Hold it, keep it
Retain his perfection, that boy that i see
He feels my gaze
'love' he says 'come lie with me'
Nestling his face he breathes in my scent
Taking into his slumber the fragrance of each strand of my hair
Entranced by his lullaby
The beat of his heart sings me sweetly to rest
I whisper good night to the moon and await the sun
And pray that the dreams of two will become one

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angelblueyes
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since 2003-07-19
Posts 2148
Oklahoma
1 posted 2003-10-01 10:49 PM


I'd like to welcome you to Passions, since I haven't been here for a few days.This loves sweet slumber was very sensous and passionate and I hope it comes true for you.
Crystal

Tim
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since 1999-06-08
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2 posted 2003-10-01 11:28 PM


Nicely written, enjoyed the read.
Mistletoe Angel
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3 posted 2003-10-01 11:59 PM




(smiles) Awwwwwwwww, and I wish for all your dreams to come true for you as good things always come to those who hope and dream, sweet friend, your gorgeous words light these pages, it is a blessing to have you here, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Ku'uipo, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

I don't need no proof when it comes to God and truth
I can see the sun set and I perceive

***Live***

n2dmystic
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since 2003-09-27
Posts 253
beyond the doors of perception
4 posted 2003-10-02 04:33 AM


quite nice indeed!!! Welcome to Passions, and may your poems grow as wildflowers of Passion.  thank you

Peace, Joe
in the big MT
seeking the serendipitous magical mysteries of life's ubiquitous twisteries

Marge Tindal
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5 posted 2003-10-02 10:23 AM


Ku'uipo~
This is about as soft and lovely as they come~
*sigh*
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram
   noles1@totcon.com     

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16
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Kapolei, Hawaii, USA
6 posted 2003-10-03 03:44 AM


silky...James
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