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Paula Finn
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0 posted 2003-10-01 10:06 AM



Don't walk away
Don't turn your back
For once, just once
Hear what I have to say

It don't have to be
This way between us
Just this once
Don't ignore me

This time...I won't be ignored
This time...you'll finally see
This time...there's no going back
This time...will never be

Don't shut me out
I know I'm just a kid
Can't you just listen
You don't have to shout

I'm so afraid
Of this pain inside
But you won't stop
'til all the blames been laid

This time...please just hear me
This time...don't slam the door
This time...hear my pleading
This time...I won't be ignored

Now all thats left
Is an empty room
Two parents hearts
Battered and bereft

All it really takes
Is an open heart
For once, just once
Give the kid a break

This time...theres no one to listen
This time...just an emptiness
This time...there's no second chance
This time...can't be ignored


Inspired by a Lincoln Park song

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1 posted 2003-10-01 10:42 AM




Wonderfully met!

I love this

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2 posted 2003-10-01 11:38 AM






(big hugggssssssss) Oh, you must be talking about that song "Faint", dearest friend, I have heard that song and though I'm not a Linkin Park fan (I'm not big on new heavy rock music), I understand the emotions so well in that song and no one should ever be denied or neglected! (sad sigh) This is a wonderful challenge response, sweet friend, God Bless You, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Paula, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

I don't need no proof when it comes to God and truth
I can see the sun set and I perceive

***Live***

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3 posted 2003-10-01 12:43 PM


Excellent!
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4 posted 2003-10-01 07:15 PM


Just straighten your hat, shake loose your pistols, and turn that corner toward OK Corral.....

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5 posted 2003-10-02 05:03 AM


Hey, you turning songwriter and sqeezing me out?
I thought we were pals!!

Just kidding, this is a fine job Paula and it contains a pertinent message.


Eric

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Paula Finn
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6 posted 2003-10-02 09:16 AM


OOOOPS...just goes to show how much I pay attention to names...mispelled Linkin Park...duh...anyways thanks guys...oh and Eric...whats a little healthy competition among friends huh? GO BLUES!!!!!
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