navwin » Archives » Open Poetry #29 » Midnight
Open Poetry #29
Post A Reply Post New Topic Midnight Go to Previous / Newer Topic Back to Topic List Go to Next / Older Topic
KoKo
Senior Member
since 2003-02-15
Posts 995
Inside the shadow's shadow

0 posted 2003-09-30 11:14 PM


Only lonely shadows laugh
Across a midnight feild
With the stars in midnight sky...

Why they never hear my midnight tears...
Or my screaming whisper of "good-bye"...
I'm not sure.

I think that maybe, oh just maybe
They do hear...
But would rather just deny.

© Copyright 2003 Lauren - All Rights Reserved
Susan Caldwell
Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348
Florida
1 posted 2003-09-30 11:16 PM


Ditto.

Very nice.

Susan

angelblueyes
Member Elite
since 2003-07-19
Posts 2148
Oklahoma
2 posted 2003-09-30 11:22 PM


I hear you loud and clear.
Crystal

Kaoru
Deputy Moderator 1 TourDeputy Moderator 1 TourDeputy Moderator 1 Tour
Member Elite
since 2003-06-07
Posts 3892
where the wild flowers grow
3 posted 2003-10-01 01:36 AM


Wondeful~!
Mistletoe Angel
Deputy Moderator 10 ToursDeputy Moderator 10 ToursDeputy Moderator 5 Tours
Member Empyrean
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon
4 posted 2003-10-01 01:46 AM






(big hugggsssssss) Oh Lauren, it may seem that way sometimes when the ebony is so thick in the air, but truly "they" care and ae constantly guiding you with light and warmth even when it is hard to see! (sigh) God Bless You, sweet friend, this is heartfelt, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Lauren, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

I don't need no proof when it comes to God and truth
I can see the sun set and I perceive

***Live***

Post A Reply Post New Topic ⇧ top of page ⇧ Go to Previous / Newer Topic Back to Topic List Go to Next / Older Topic
All times are ET (US). All dates are in Year-Month-Day format.
navwin » Archives » Open Poetry #29 » Midnight

Passions in Poetry | pipTalk Home Page | Main Poetry Forums | 100 Best Poems

How to Join | Member's Area / Help | Private Library | Search | Contact Us | Login
Discussion | Tech Talk | Archives | Sanctuary