I wonder will we ever escape eachother?

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gemjop
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since 2002-11-18

Posts 2587
Pencilveinia, USA

0 posted 2003-09-30 05:48 PM

I wondered this hour
if we would ever escape eachother
for good

For
every time
that feels like the last
is never

You did not tame me easily
punished you
for years
over mis spent youth
and mis placed decency

I wonder if your theory
is the only truth you have

Our paths
will carry on crossing
until we become one

Though
I won't waste these years
believing in such thinly spread
fairytale

You are the locked gate
upon coming home
the cold concrete upon tired thigh
waiting for the someone
the anyone with key and warmth

I remember
thinking I knew

I will not plead with fate to bring you back to me
nor I back to you

Still this hour
I wonder if we will ever escape eachother

for better
or worse.

QjQ
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since 2003-04-18

Posts 3756
U.S.A.

1 posted 2003-09-30 06:00 PM

thoughts expressed very well,,,,

Wind

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since 2002-10-12

Posts 2981

2 posted 2003-09-30 06:11 PM

this one gave me the shivers. i haven't had the shivers in forever

And the angel said unto me, "These are the cries of the carrots, the cries of the carrots!"
-Tool

Susan Caldwell
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-12-27

Posts 8348
Florida

3 posted 2003-09-30 06:13 PM

"Still this hour
I wonder if we will ever escape eachother

for better
or worse."

You stepped into me on this one..

"go away...no, no please don't go...call..don't call...touch me...don't touch" ...my thoughts on a daily basis..

garysgirl

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since 2002-09-29

Posts 19237
Florida, USA

4 posted 2003-10-01 12:41 PM

You are the locked gate
upon coming home
the cold concrete upon tired thigh
waiting for the someone
the anyone with key and warmth

Gemma, I love this part especially.
Very, very good writing!!

Hugs and love, my friend

Ethel

Kaoru

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since 2003-06-07

Posts 3892
where the wild flowers grow

5 posted 2003-10-01 01:35 AM

wow, gem..just wow..

Mistletoe Angel

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since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

6 posted 2003-10-01 01:35 AM

(big hugggssssssss) Oh Gemma, this is so deeply heartfelt, sweet friend, to have the back gate slammed on us and keeping us locked up in wrong man's land is truly a humiliating situation! (sad sigh) May you leap over the fence and pole vault to freedom, sweet friend, God Bless You, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Gemma, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

I don't need no proof when it comes to God and truth
I can see the sun set and I perceive

***Live***

Dark Angel
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since 1999-08-04

Posts 10095

7 posted 2003-10-01 01:43 AM

Jeez, you're taking me breath away.

Maree

fate is not just
whose cooking smells good
but which way the wind blows

(Ani DiFranco)

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

8 posted 2003-10-01 04:19 AM

a feeling I know well

gemjop
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since 2002-11-18

Posts 2587
Pencilveinia, USA

9 posted 2003-10-01 06:28 AM

QJQ ~ Thankyou sir, for always stopping by.

Lizzeeeee ~ The Shivers! Well, your writes of late have me shaking, not shivering. I love your dark.

Susan ~ Oh god I know, I'm like that, I think it's when you know you can't freely give all the love you want to, you hold back, then think, no I LOVE him!, then you think, no hold back, because they dont love you to that level.
Thanks for always understanding gal.

Ethel ~ I like that part too, as It was actually a real experience, as well as the way he made me feel.
Love you E.M, youre the best!

Meg ~ I could, and do feel the same of your writes. You wow me. thanks lady.

Noah ~ A reply from you always makes me smile, youre full of such life and love, so thankyou my friend.

Maree ~ Thankyou VERY much. like your signature!

Dixie ~ I know you know, thankyou for always understanding, but i'm sorry that you do.

Thanks for your words, my rambling insecure thoughts don't deserve such lovely responses.

~I wanna live, I wanna give, I've been a miner for a heart of gold~ Neil Young

LeeJ
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since 2003-06-19

Posts 13296

10 posted 2003-10-01 06:41 AM

I believe you already have, become one...that is...something that cannot be erased, unless, someone has caused another too much pain, abuse, or has been controlling and dishonest. But, the love was felt, none-the-less, and that cannot be stained or forgotten...ever. And so, within the intimacy of life you have gained from the great love you felt for this person, in both the good and the not so good. Hugs and best wishes sent your way always. Love to read you. Your friend Lee J.

gemjop
Member Elite

since 2002-11-18

Posts 2587
Pencilveinia, USA

11 posted 2003-10-01 06:59 AM

Lee, I miss you sometimes y know, when I don't get to stop here long enough to reply all I want to. your words are always a comfort friend, youre worldly wise, and your poetry says so. thankyou.

in fact, i'm off to hunt your words down right now.

~I wanna live, I wanna give, I've been a miner for a heart of gold~ Neil Young

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