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LeeJ
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since 2003-06-19
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0 posted 2003-09-30 02:29 PM


Woman

Dew and moist tropical air, pour inspiration
Like delicate vibrations of nerves
Effortless harmony echoes, superb, rare
The ingenious heart of dreams
Swirling and singing like fond remembrances
Childhood and leafy sprays of morning roses
And the inevitable importance equally driven
Woman!
Forming a community, most narrative and romantic
Like wings of thought, slipping over calm waves
Free in the wind where we are brought together
In delicate flecks of hypothesis, sipping on the
Energy of summer, and the crystal clear azure sea
Floating, motionless
A prayer where energy is never contained
We vision life’s mysteries and future, the mood of ecstasy
That touches everything, atoms drifting free in space
A market screaming volumes, smoothing rough surfaces
Embracing soft lips of twilight amorous  
Like a ripple in the universe, every fiber streaming silver emulsions
I am a wish with power, privileged motion, and an eagle’s claw
A Goddess of harvested golden rays…a greenhouse of consumption
An ardent path of light, and some periodical event
I am child, who requires the touch of morning’s dove
Spiritual,
Submitting to the tests of inspiration, encompassing a rich globe
Directly me precisely to an unknown place
Bright white prose, endless like a waterfall
Gestures whispering intimacy in the rain
Cool like the silent stars, leading the way
And I dare think of candles, their flames drifting into emptiness
Literally vacant seas of eternity, where we shall savor its taste, easy like the rocking waves
Where our losses become dust, inheritance, still waiting to be claimed.


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QjQ
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1 posted 2003-09-30 03:08 PM


fabulous write,,,

                                                            

Kaoru
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2 posted 2003-09-30 03:14 PM


Always amazing and diverse...
gemjop
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since 2002-11-18
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3 posted 2003-10-01 07:06 AM


Literally vacant seas of eternity, where we shall savor its taste, easy like the rocking waves

Sensuality at it's best here lee.

Told you i was gonna hunt you down.

Like a ripple in the universe, every fiber streaming silver emulsions
I am a wish with power, privileged motion, and an eagle’s claw
A Goddess of harvested golden rays…a greenhouse of consumption
An ardent path of light, and some periodical event
I am child, who requires the touch of morning’s dove

Damn woman, you truly are woman! I do look up to your writes Lee, they are never lacking of insight.

p.s, don't know if i've said this already but,love the new pic, pretty lady.

littlewing
Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655
New York
4 posted 2003-10-01 09:09 AM


Lee you write with the grace of one
who has been there and back again

Like wings of thought, slipping over calm waves
Free in the wind where we are brought together

yes, beautiful

and this:

I am child, who requires the touch of morning’s dove
Spiritual,


timeless
xxoo

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