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Gentle Spirit
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0 posted 2003-09-30 09:06 AM



~*Celestial Skies*~
         

Entrancing celestial skies
mesmerizing shimmers
of silver and gold,
hues
blend into
serendipitious moments
filled        with peace.


Diamonds sparkle...
carefully placed~
positioned, just so...
onto the horizons...
of eternity.

Such a masterpiece
created
on crispness of cool
Autumn air;

in its vastness
held the hopes~
and dreams.....

of those who dare
to gaze
upon celestial skies,
and smile
in the knowing
that tomorrow the sun
shall rise...
once more.


(C) dmsmith
9-29-03
{late night ponderings while
feeling the Autumn breeze blow by...}


It's better than I could have planned..
it's made me who I am...
{Trace Adkins}
I can't make you something your not
but I can be me again...deep down
I know I can....{Tracy Lawrence}



[This message has been edited by Gentle Spirit (09-30-2003 09:55 AM).]

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Sunshine
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1 posted 2003-09-30 09:12 AM


and smile
in the knowing
that tomorrow the sun
shall rise...
once more.

~*~

hoptimists...
are wonderful people...


Seymour Tabin
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2 posted 2003-09-30 09:13 AM


Gentle Spirit,
A lovely write, fully enjoyed.

Enchantress
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3 posted 2003-09-30 09:14 AM


Beautiful dear Donna...
Simply beautiful!
~Smiles, Hugs & Luv, Nancy~


~ I love your glances meeting mine
     across forever or the room ~

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4 posted 2003-09-30 09:29 AM


( smiling)... we all have to believe in something don't we?? I just happen to believe the sun will come up again..

nice pondering...

vandana
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5 posted 2003-09-30 09:41 AM


enjoy your read
Gentle Spirit
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6 posted 2003-09-30 12:35 PM


Sunny lady, somedays I am,
and somedays...I just don't know...lol.
Hugs you...

Sey, thanks for stopping in
glad that you enjoyed.

Nancy. so are you! Just beautiful....
thanks hon, hugs.

Yes Ron, we all ust believe and
in my years one thing I have come to
know as a constant is that the sun
surely does rise (and some mornings
way to darn early though...)
As always, thanks for your thoughts.

Vandanna, glad you enjoyed
and thank you for peeking in.

It's better than I could have planned..
it's made me who I am...
{Trace Adkins}

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7 posted 2003-09-30 02:03 PM


GentlestOfSpirits~

*sighsssss*
How very lovely, poetess~

I just adore it~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram
   noles1@totcon.com     

Gentle Spirit
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8 posted 2003-09-30 07:56 PM


Margie gal thanks, for leaving such kind thoughts and hugs back to you....big ones....
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9 posted 2003-09-30 11:55 PM




(smiles) Oh Donna, I too believe with all my heart each day the sun will keep rising and setting and when one door closes, another will open and dreams are destined to come true! (kiss on cheek) God Bless You, sweet friend, I love this, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Donna, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

I don't need no proof when it comes to God and truth
I can see the sun set and I perceive

***Live***

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