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gemjop
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0 posted 2003-10-02 11:08 AM


Cartoon laughter
pearl white teeth
are yellowed now

Long grown out of
yet
is all I can feel

Among all these
cartoon movements

Bold
before me
you would have
closed my eyes
for me

With your human
velvet laugh

and soft moves

I miss now
our senseless giggle

beneath the blanket

entwined

over nothing

funny

just


us

[This message has been edited by gemjop (10-02-2003 11:14 AM).]

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ctowen
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1 posted 2003-10-02 11:52 AM


Nothing senseless about giggles ...

      they grow into laughter which feeds the soul.

   Memories are what's left, my friend,
        and they truly enhance the senses.


          

Cpat Hair
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2 posted 2003-10-02 12:25 PM


easy to miss such things... cartoon laughter perhaps..perhaps some more than animated empty...

nicely done

Earth Angel
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3 posted 2003-10-02 12:45 PM


They sound like wonderful memories, dear gem drop. Hold them close, and may you soon be making new memories for your tomorrows.

Remember, love finds you when you least expect it!

Huggums,
LL

Aenimal
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4 posted 2003-10-02 02:12 PM


much better in cartoons, the ability to deal with life's troubles, a bomb an anvill a truck have little impact on the character whereas this reality impacts us with the tiniest and most useless things..hugs
Mistletoe Angel
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5 posted 2003-10-02 02:26 PM




(big hugggsssssss) Oh Gemma, I wish for you to always hold these memories true to your heart, sweet friend, giggles are beautiful and wonderful in life and you can make your laughter uch like in the cartoons if you animate yourself to the simple blessings always! (kiss on cheek) God Bless You, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have suc a beautiful heart, sweet Gemma, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

I don't need no proof when it comes to God and truth
I can see the sun set and I perceive

***Live***

bsquirrel
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6 posted 2003-10-03 12:41 PM


The second poem in as many days that ends with "us." Sometimes I wonder how the other end of a disintegrated relationship bears up -- is he as broken up over this as you are? That's what helped me get over Heidi, when I realized .... she had moved on, and I was left behind with myself.

Couldn't have asked for a better gift, really.

.m.

passing shadows
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7 posted 2003-10-03 12:44 PM


I miss, sometimes too, things like that
Susan Caldwell
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8 posted 2003-10-03 01:11 PM


Sometimes those memories are like a punch in the face...



Susan

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