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No longer "virgin"
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No longer "virgin" |
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Fariegirl Member
since 2003-02-05
Posts 147 |
I feel so dirty, All so used, Now so old, Not so new, I didn't get pregnate, But I didn't have fun, At least I'm not carrying, Around a small son, All my freinds, They help me out, "Girl why oh why did you take this route?" I'm no longer perfect, Not even a little great, Not so innocent, Never a saint, No longer "virgin", They can all see, Why did I do it? I know that's not me. My life is ruined, I'm only 14, I have HIV, The only one I can blame, Is no other then me. Just to let everyone know, I am a virgin and don't have HIV |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
I am glad to see the last line. This poem is reflective of many who are still children yet growing far too fast. Peer pressure and hormones are a terrible tag team! |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (big hugggsssssss) Oh Kathryn, I am so happy and relieved you are not a victim to this, but this poem made me cry because there truly are sadly many victims in which this is actually the case, who are growing up too fast and their lives at risk! (sad sigh) My heart goes out to them all and I pray for all the children, sweet friend, God Bless You, you have a golden compassionate heart, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Kathryn, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton I don't need no proof when it comes to God and truth |
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Ringo
since 2003-02-20
Posts 3684Saluting with misty eyes |
Faeriegirl- This is absolutely... uh... man, there just aren't words... Congrats on a smashing write. We are all equal but we’re individually different |
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Jason Lyle Senior Member
since 2003-02-07
Posts 1438With my darkling |
A sharp write and mature outlook, to know this truth already is admireable.So many have took back in regret to find this wisdom.Nice Job. Jason |
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Ratleader
since 2003-01-23
Posts 7026Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass |
Solid -- well done! You had me beliving every word, so I'm glad you put in the disclaimer. ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸ ¸¸ºº> ~~~(¸¸ER¸¸ºº> |
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n2dmystic Member
since 2003-09-27
Posts 253beyond the doors of perception |
yes I too am glad for the disclaimer. HIV killed my brother, brother-in-law, and friends. Very well written. Thank you for the emotional outlet. Peace, Joe |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Fariegirl - I believe you have written about many that this has happened to... BC |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Fariegirl Good write,  |
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KristieSue
since 2003-01-31
Posts 1460PA, US |
Played with my emotions well. Thank God for the last line! Great write. "Vision without action is a daydream. Action without vision is a nightmare." -Japanese Proverb ~ KS [This message has been edited by KristieSue (09-28-2003 09:49 AM).] |
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James_A_Fraser Senior Member
since 2003-09-03
Posts 972Out Making Anticlines |
I notice that your replies here are almost exclusively from men -- reeled us all in, you did! And we're the ones who most need to read this one. |
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Riley
since 2002-07-18
Posts 1038in the pouring rain |
loving it kat! loving it! ** smile ** screw you ** keep smiling ** haha ri * the pouring rain kisses my lips with innocence as you look into my eyes * |
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