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Hard to please |
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gemjop Member Elite
since 2002-11-18
Posts 2587Pencilveinia, USA 
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There are never enough silences in her coversation revels in ability to make him use words to fill the gaps she shoots with every convicting pause Did I spell you right? graceful posture holds so much tension Did I pronounce your sharp edges correctly? I'm just not that kind to sit up too staight when you pass overhead he may look up to you I look down ~I wanna live, I wanna give, I've been a miner for a heart of gold~ Neil Young |
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1slick_lady Member Ascendant
since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088standing on a shadow's lace |
gem...you look down to her...many will have to look up to you...h |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (big hugggsssssss) Oh Gemma, my heart goes out to you, sweet friend, someone will look up to you though and see exactly how special you are as you truly are a golden spirit! (sigh) God Bless You, sweet friend, I send angel hugs your way, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Gemma, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton I don't need no proof when it comes to God and truth |
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dingusjr Member
since 2003-09-24
Posts 415Missouri |
nice Gem...really nice. Larry |
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Aenimal Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350the ass-end of space |
listen to h, she knows |
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QjQ Member Elite
since 2003-04-18
Posts 3756U.S.A. |
interestingly good,,, |
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Insomniac Cat Member
since 2003-09-23
Posts 69The Land of the Dadaists |
Excellent! I really like this one. Thanks for making my night! |
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Ratleader
since 2003-01-23
Posts 7026Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass |
A gem, Gem -- I do believe I know her, though maybe with a different face....and I know why she does it. You do too, if I read this handsome poem rightly. I even made her stop, once....seems lips can only do one thing at a time.....I was looking down too, as I recall... ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸ ¸¸ºº> ~~~(¸¸ER¸¸ºº> |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
wow  smack! |
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Aimster Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297Charlotte, NC |
this packed a punch! great write! take care. amy  "love is like a butterfly-- |
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n2dmystic Member
since 2003-09-27
Posts 253beyond the doors of perception |
someone somewhere is feeling the sting of a metaphysical tongue lashing. Very nice. Peace, Joe |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Gemma, are you saying that she talks too much?? LOL Hi, my friend.  This is another one I'm keeping. I'm loving your sassiness. LOL You just keep telling it like it is.. Don't let them run over you, Sweetie. Heart hugs to you  Ethel |
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Wind
since 2002-10-12
Posts 2981 |
gem knows how to make them burn and sizzle. and if I write something it will be very dark. becasue I am in an abusive mood  And the angel said unto me, "These are the cries of the carrots, the cries of the carrots!" |
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gemjop Member Elite
since 2002-11-18
Posts 2587Pencilveinia, USA |
Hello me sweeties! thankyou all. this is a woman who nearly caused my dear friend to drop out of college, he wanted to give up because of the way she makes him feel. he really tries with her too, which is even more heart breaking. i talked him round, but it all seemed to have come to boiling point, and he really was ready to go. But oh, she has some ways about her i've never seen in any other human ever. It enraged me to think he could give up, as hes so clever, just because of this woman, who shouldn't be doing this to him in the first place! Thankyou, always for reading. ~I wanna live, I wanna give, I've been a miner for a heart of gold~ Neil Young |
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