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Bonnie j
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0 posted 2003-09-27 01:28 PM



A rich man is he.
The first time I seen his face his eyes were quiet and gentle.The second time one year
later.Still a rich man but on the run. His eyes cold, full of hate, all love lost within his
eyes.
This is why I was inspired to write Eyes.
Bonnie J.

Eyes

A persons eyes are a look into a person’s soul.
They are the mirrors of who we are.
The innocent eyes of a baby taking his first breath.
His reaching out in complete trust.
Eyes looking at the one they love, wanting to touch,
wanting to hold.
Sparkling, smiling and filled with dark loving passion.
Reaching out in complete trust.
Eyes filled with anger and hate.
Shining like the angry sea in a violent storm
or sparkling with uncontrollable hatred.
Eyes of a killer of humanity.
Maybe a look of kindness or the look of innocence
or empty
devoid of all emotion as he strikes fear once again.
How did this innocent baby grow into
becoming this evil being, leading us into undeniable fear?
This once was a loving child, reaching out in complete
trust.
This evil, this cancer of the mind.
If we would have looked deeply
would we have seen?
Was it in his beautiful gentle eyes?

Love Bon-Bon

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1 posted 2003-09-27 03:38 PM




(big hugggsssssss) We may never know, dearest friend, and that is a very heartaching truth as eyes and looks can be deceiving and it saddens me to see this person change like that! (sad sigh) I send angel hugs your way, sweet friend, this is a very sad piece, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Bonnie, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

I don't need no proof when it comes to God and truth
I can see the sun set and I perceive

***Live***

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2 posted 2003-09-27 03:43 PM


I agree completely.....for I have written
many thoughts of eyes and what they say
of a person...Eyes don't hide very well.

Nicely put BonnieJ

QjQ
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3 posted 2003-09-27 06:05 PM


behind every set of eyes theres a story to be told,,,

                                                       

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