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Bonnie j
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0 posted 2003-09-26 11:34 AM



Beware

A spray of lace she does leave
Bangles and beads she does weave
She goes from tree to tree with glee
Beware you better flee
A gentle voice a coy little wink
You are on the very brink
A finger here and a toe there
You better listen and beware
Her name is Spider
You were told not to sit beside her
Bangles and beads she does weave
Now you are unable to leave

Love Bon-Bon

© Copyright 2003 Bonnie j - All Rights Reserved
angelblueyes
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1 posted 2003-09-26 11:35 AM


You both are great.This was much enjoyed.
Crystal

gemjop
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2 posted 2003-09-26 12:55 PM


bonnie this is fantastic! off to read this again, love the origionality of it!

Instant karma's gonna get you.

vlraynes
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3 posted 2003-09-26 07:39 PM



Ah...smiling at this, Bonnie.
Love what you've done here, my friend.

Thanks for making sure I checked it out.

Hugs to you...

When the power of love overcomes the
love of power the world will know peace.
-Jimi Hendrix

Kethry
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4 posted 2003-09-26 07:41 PM


woven with care to make you beware. Wonderful!
Kethry

Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind.  Unknown



James_A_Fraser
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5 posted 2003-09-26 08:22 PM


I   think   I   sat   there   once   myself!



~~J

QjQ
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6 posted 2003-09-26 08:28 PM


your words have woven a terrific read,,,

                                                       

Sunshine
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7 posted 2003-09-26 08:32 PM



A perfect blend!

garysgirl
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8 posted 2003-09-26 09:05 PM


I really liked this Bonnie.  
Hugs  
Ethel

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9 posted 2003-09-26 11:27 PM






(smiles) Awwwwwwww, don't be afraid, it's only Miss Spider and she'd love to have tea with you! (kiss on cheek) Hehehe, tea with extra sugar...I mean, poetic inducing herbs, hehehe, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Bonnie, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

I don't need no proof when it comes to God and truth
I can see the sun set and I perceive

***Live***

cuda04
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10 posted 2003-09-26 11:30 PM


magnificent

Always look forward, never look back, dreams are much more refreshing than regrets.

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