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LeeJ
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0 posted 2003-09-26 07:58 AM


Melody like almond shaped eyes, positive in depth
Pure in natures pools, dancing across my room
Astute examinations of dreams, captivate passions
There is stellar significance and definition in each our worlds
Clearly spiritually based and spiral
To the outer heavens and those imposed showers
And yet through song and meditation we are trickling
Thoughts into images through the power of space
A spiced aromatic pleasure, within a spiritual place
Where floods arrive in messages, somewhere from above
Oh the cosmic atoms of sensory, ultimate human desire touch
A behavior which is an unfathomable mystic alliance
Living in its own right, and not our own paintings, but a very significant rhyme
A balm after the rugged cliffs of life, turn into pure joy, if only for one second
The experiences we receive are profound and unforgettable
They appear in the far reaches of our souls, and vigorously take hold
We evolve to a point of worshiped devotion, where all ascend
Within a union of Platonic mysticism, a companionship that we all so
Long for, collecting a divine number…perfection in it’s demise
To understand the order of the universe, the ascension by means
Of completion, concept, and underlying essence…echoes within
Our memory, ancient sentiments, reflective dreams in unity
Nothing but nothing multiplies by itself, and only counts when
Another joins in union…and the structure of all things is dependent
On another thing, and another, all created by and begins with one original
Thought, the dynamic force, under the image of a physical and cosmic power
Without one, there cannot be the other….notions of time, history, astronomy
And the divine Word by which is a semantic language, temporal and boundless


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1 posted 2003-09-26 08:12 AM


Our memory, ancient sentiments, reflective dreams in unity
Nothing but nothing multiplies by itself, and only counts when
Another joins in union…and the structure of all things is dependent
On another thing, and another,


perhaps..the joining in union is at times with ones ownself..and the dependencies are on joining the parts of ourselves into one
we are the multiple that in unity of essence becomes again.... the one...

LeeJ
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2 posted 2003-09-26 08:21 AM


astounding thought Cap, thank you for pondering and for your comment.

But its so asounding, how without one small thing the other would not be...take the samllest of insects...to the tallest tree, and how magnicantly one cannot be without the other, how so profoundly, one effects the other, and how in many cases, could not exist without the other, a perfect balance, so to speak...

  

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3 posted 2003-09-26 08:38 AM


astounding? ( chuckling) the fact the little piece parts of this world..this universe are all interconnected only makes perfect sense. The laws of physics show there is order in the underlying structure of this universe. For all things to NOT be connected would destroy the foundation that this universe in particular is based on and it would then, not be this universe...

there is asexual reproduction in some organisms which would imply there is no need for two..and that independence from that need mean one can reproduce itself without any other liike creatures, there does still, however, remain an interdependence of all organisms on environment and generally other life forms for survival..

No man is an Island... has a broader meaning when applied to this place we live and all that lives in it with us...


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4 posted 2003-09-26 08:40 AM


Amazed..
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5 posted 2003-09-26 08:45 AM


LeeJ
You mean, one for all and all for one. LOL


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6 posted 2003-09-26 09:45 AM


Interdependency! No man--or anything else for that matter--stands alone.

God is our  maestro!

You are a very fine poetic philosopher, Dear Lee!

~ All of life is part of the Divine Orchestra!

Love & Eternal Light,
Linda

QjQ
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7 posted 2003-09-27 08:31 PM


terrific,,  

                                                        

Saunni
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8 posted 2003-09-27 09:15 PM


Wow, this is beyond any words I have. Great write!!

Sauni:)The Only Time I See The Sun Is When I'm Within That Vanilla Breeze.The Only Time I'm One With The Sun Is When He Shelters Me From The Rain.

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9 posted 2003-09-29 09:47 AM


  

                                                            

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