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Bonnie j
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0 posted 2003-09-21 01:31 PM



Yearning

A deep yearning is swelling within my heart today.
Music playing flooding back memories.
Days of yesteryear slashing at my inner thoughts.
Yearning to hear the laughter
fill these empty halls.
Yearning to hear the music once again.
To hear the laughter within your voice-
To see smiling eyes.
Silent walls no answer will they give.
The ache within my chest is heavy with pain
causing tremors of unbridled breath.
The tears swell and fall into an open abyss-
An abyss void of the sun
and
of the lingering touch of warmth.
Today.
Ah! Yes! Today!
Yearning today.
A bleeding heart of lonely,empty, yearning.

Bon-Bon

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littlewing
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since 2003-03-02
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1 posted 2003-09-21 01:32 PM


Bonnie:
goodness today you are reading my mind:

To see smiling eyes.

how I long to see this once again, I do
Beautiful writing
xxoo

garysgirl
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2 posted 2003-09-21 01:48 PM


Bonnie, this is so sad. I hope
your day gets better.
Hugs  
Ethel

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3 posted 2003-09-21 02:57 PM




(big hugggsssssss) Awwwwwww, I'm sorry you're feeling this way, sweet friend, I believe every now and then we yearn for something and feel a bit glum inside but fear not, as the sunshine is destined to fill your heart again very soon forever! (kiss on cheek) God Bless You, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Bonnie, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

I don't need no proof when it comes to God and truth
I can see the sun set and I perceive

***Live***

QjQ
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since 2003-04-18
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4 posted 2003-09-21 05:48 PM


feelings well expressed,,,

                                    

vlraynes
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since 2000-07-25
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5 posted 2003-09-24 04:38 AM



Yes...I know this yearning all too well.
Hugs to you,
~Vicky

When the power of love overcomes the
love of power the world will know peace.
-Jimi Hendrix

LeeJ
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since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296

6 posted 2003-09-24 07:23 AM


I feel like this when people hurt my feelings, or when my body is not living up to my expectations and hurts a little...or when people say cruel words, or when my hormones get bent outa shape b/c I can no longer work out and get rid of that stored up adreneline.  But, when this feeling comes along and taps me on the shoulder, I say, well lady, it could be much much worse, and then I remember all the troves of blessings
I've been given in my life, bringing warmth and a smile to my heart.  And in those thoughts is the warm smile of your face, and a thoughts of a very good friend in you, I've made.  In all the years of writing and posting on line, I've been so blessed with the Friendship of you and Rene...and God willing perhaps someday we will meet in person, to sit down together and have that double choc cake and a lot of laughs.  Bonnie, thank you, from my heart, for an ever listening ear, your point of views, opinions, and poetry.  I consider myself very fortunate to have met you, and share some very nice quality time over the telephone and in emails...your are one terrific and elegant lady!  Smiles and hugs

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