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Cassandra 98
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since 2002-12-08
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0 posted 2003-11-19 12:23 PM


Where do I go from here
Living this life of fear

Memories...how can I forget
I can see you in this silhouette
Forgive and forget is the hardest thing to do
If only this was untrue

I feel like I have lost the will in me
Brokenness revealed
These feelings no longer sealed

Never reaching what I want to reach...No escape

Your Imperfection

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1 posted 2003-11-19 02:19 PM


painful... the feelings.. but well presented..and understood...

nicely done....

passing shadows
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displaced
2 posted 2003-11-20 02:23 PM


gawd...I know this! Well understood.
Hockeychick19
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since 2002-10-29
Posts 430
Massachusetts, USA
3 posted 2003-11-20 03:07 PM


Cassabdra,

I can't tell you how many times I've felt like this... the pain. I'm glad you were able to let it out and share it with us here at Passions.

~Kelly~

Life is a gift so live it to the fullest!

Earth Angel
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Realms of Light
4 posted 2003-11-20 03:12 PM


You have expressed those feelings very well. May they soon be behind you ~ and they will as you continue to pour your thoughts onto paper...

Warm, healing hugs,
EA

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