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What Game Is This?
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SimplyGold Senior Member
since 2002-07-10
Posts 1453 |
What Game Is This? What game is this that you play to toy with feelings not your own You see from your side with tainted vision and claim that you have been the victim You pull from words long ago forgotten inflicting hurt you have been dealt Yes, inflicting more than you ever held Blind sided from those wounds you felt With daggered words aimed with care running head on of no concern For words once said lie beneath give way to continued abuse never ever forgotten this game you play is a poor excuse |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
Indeed . . . ahh Gold , I do know this game *wrinkling brow at the thought* you have penned it perfectly xxoo |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
You are way ahead of the game in that you seem to see how it is being played out. Your overview may be your salvation! Perhaps you should quit the game while you're ahead! Whether this poem reflects fact or fiction, it packs a punch to my solar plexus, dear Golden One! Loving hugs, EA |
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James_A_Fraser Senior Member
since 2003-09-03
Posts 972Out Making Anticlines |
I've been on both sides of this, and now the third side, which is even worse: silence. |
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Cassandra 98 Junior Member
since 2002-12-08
Posts 17 |
Quite odd, I have been there the other day with my mother. Some people never change. |
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beckers716 Junior Member
since 2003-11-16
Posts 39Ohio |
You captured the game perfectly! Very nice read! Only when all hope seems lost, can you hope to find yourself |
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garysgirl  
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
SG, you are telling it like it is. Good writing, lady.  Hugs  Ethel |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Very well done. |
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SimplyGold Senior Member
since 2002-07-10
Posts 1453 |
Littlewing, I too am often perplexed. Thanks for the reply. SG |
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SimplyGold Senior Member
since 2002-07-10
Posts 1453 |
EA, This is fact born from the fustration of trying to communicate. I dispise the game and am afraid that the alternative is withdrawal. I am often surpised that we communicate at all! James A Fraser, your insight chills me. You are right on target. Brilliant, so now the questions. How and why does it come to that and once arrived how do we get out?? SG [This message has been edited by SimplyGold (11-19-2003 12:26 PM).] |
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SimplyGold Senior Member
since 2002-07-10
Posts 1453 |
Beckers, Garysgirl and Sunshine, Thank you all. Good to see eveyone again! SG |
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