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1slick_lady
Member Ascendant

since 2000-12-22

Posts 6088
standing on a shadow's lace

0 posted 2003-11-18 05:03 PM

Spin

Yes,

I am
the night
and I
am drawn
to your
pull and
will forever
revolve around
the moon

Cpat Hair

Member Patricius

since 2001-06-05

Posts 11793

1 posted 2003-11-18 05:12 PM

an intriguing image..of night revolving around the moon...

well done Helen

littlewing
Member Rara Avis

since 2003-03-02

Posts 9655
New York

2 posted 2003-11-18 06:06 PM

reminded me of a swirling mass
of
you
dancing the stars
tiptoe here
and there
whirling about
sidestepping the collison
of
meteors only
to stop and rest
when satiated

*smile*
xxoo

SimplyGold
Senior Member

since 2002-07-10

Posts 1453

3 posted 2003-11-18 06:24 PM

This is a great twist. Like looking at a photo negative. Very intriguing. Enjoyed

SG

Ratleader

Member Rara Avis

since 2003-01-23

Posts 7026
Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass

4 posted 2003-11-18 07:51 PM

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Temptress

Moderator

Member Rara Avis

since 1999-06-15

Posts 7136
Mobile, AL

5 posted 2003-11-19 01:14 AM

beautiful. I wish these weren't so far down the page. Your images and the way you say things....its all wonderful, and you should be recognized more.

I LOVE YOU! I LOVE YOU! I LOVE YOU!

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

6 posted 2003-11-19 04:46 AM

awesome!

garysgirl

Member Laureate

since 2002-09-29

Posts 19237
Florida, USA

7 posted 2003-11-19 06:11 AM

Helen, I wish that I could reach right in there and write out what I feel the way you do. You are so good at doing that, and in so few words, too. I have to write and write and write, and still can't say what I want to as effectively as you can. You say what you feel so well that sometimes I don't know what to say in a reply. I read you lots of times when I don't reply. You are very talented, lady.

Hugs

Ethel

[This message has been edited by garysgirl (11-19-2003 06:12 AM).]

Ericc
Member Elite

since 2003-01-31

Posts 4178

8 posted 2003-11-19 12:03 PM

Wonderful!!

Eric

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