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Open Poetry #29

The Art Student

wintertao
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since 2003-11-17

Posts 366
Okaloosa Island, FL

0 posted 2003-11-18 10:19 AM

She carries an easel on her back
A machine gun of dreams in a sack
pictorial scenes
a sundial leans
a graveyard full of screams
Shooting with eyelash's of brown
The paintings fall to the ground
Moon monorail runs thru my eyes
And takes her off in the skies

SMC

Brad Majors

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since 2001-04-03

Posts 2647
Georgia

1 posted 2003-11-18 10:24 AM

I like this

Hockeychick19
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since 2002-10-29

Posts 430
Massachusetts, USA

2 posted 2003-11-18 10:29 AM

Wintertao,

I like this. I can picture it all as if I were there... Nice work.

~Kelly~

Life is a gift so live it to the fullest!

Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

3 posted 2003-11-18 10:44 AM

Well done and much enjoyed!
Hugs~

~I've loved you forever, in lifetimes before~

Midnitesun

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since 2001-05-18

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Gaia

4 posted 2003-11-18 11:38 AM

Very cool imagery, enjoyed the read.

Susan Caldwell
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-12-27

Posts 8348
Florida

5 posted 2003-11-18 01:04 PM

Hey tao (can I call you tao?) this was outstanding! I very much enjoyed...keep it coming...(KC & The Sunshine band anyone?)

Susan

"if you won't let me fall for you
then you won't see the best that I would love to do for you"
~Dido~

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since 2003-01-23

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6 posted 2003-11-19 12:11 PM

....a machine gun of dreams in a sack....that's sticking with me for a while, you betcha!

Up with the good stuff!

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