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scorpio
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0 posted 2003-11-17 06:08 PM




Dance Me

Fingers laced together.
Bodies musically touching.
Cheek to cheek.

believe in what your heart feels...

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1 posted 2003-11-17 06:10 PM


nicely captured my friend... you will be haring the music of sighs I assume when the ladies find this...


wintertao
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2 posted 2003-11-17 06:42 PM


very nice I really enjoyed this
JamesMichael
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3 posted 2003-11-17 07:31 PM


Nice...James
scorpio
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4 posted 2003-11-17 07:55 PM


Thank you, Ron.  Sighs are definately music to a man's ears.

Wintertao, I appreciate your comments.

Thank you, James.  Much appreciated.

believe in what your heart feels...

Enchantress
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5 posted 2003-11-17 11:34 PM


Ah dear Scorpio...here's one huge *Sigh* for you!
This is SO very beautiful, all I can think of to say is..
Dance me to the end of love....dance me!

~Soft Smiles & Tender Hugs, Tinker~

~I've loved you forever, in lifetimes before~

KoKo
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6 posted 2003-11-18 07:37 AM


Aaaaaaaw, I liked this!
Seymour Tabin
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7 posted 2003-11-18 07:42 AM


scorpio
Good one, enjoyed.

scorpio
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8 posted 2003-11-18 07:46 AM


Come dance with me, Tink. Your sigh would be sweet music to me.  Thank you.

Thanks KoKo for your support.

Glad you enjoyed this Sy.  Thank you

believe in what your heart feels...

Sunshine
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9 posted 2003-11-18 09:00 AM



My card
is still empty...

Enjoyed this, Scorpio

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10 posted 2003-11-18 09:57 AM


I liked it as well.  So simple...so clear
Jason Lyle
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11 posted 2003-11-18 10:09 AM


Simple, short, and perfect.

Jason

scorpio
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12 posted 2003-11-18 11:30 AM


I find it difficult to believe your card is empty, Karilea.  Thank you for your support.

Thank you, Copperbell, for your kind comments.

Jason, I appreciate your reply.  Thank you for reading and commenting.

believe in what your heart feels...

Susan Caldwell
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13 posted 2003-11-18 12:58 PM


I have not danced in so long...

Nicely done.

"if you won't let me fall for you
then you won't see the best that I would love to do for you"
~Dido~

passing shadows
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14 posted 2003-11-18 01:00 PM


ah...just beautiful...makes me wanna go dance
Earth Angel
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15 posted 2003-11-18 01:53 PM


Now that is my kind of dancing! ~ and poetry!

Love, Light, & Dancing cheek-to-cheek!
Linda

scorpio
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16 posted 2003-11-18 02:14 PM


Thank you, Susan. I hope you find your dancing shoes soon.

Very kind comments passing shadows.

Thank you, Linda.  I'm glad you stopped in.

believe in what your heart feels...

Enchantress
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17 posted 2003-11-18 04:21 PM


Scorpio ~ I do hope you saved the last dance for me.
Hugs~Tinker

~I've loved you forever, in lifetimes before~

Kellie_Cantrell
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18 posted 2003-11-18 04:25 PM


This was very smooth and gracious. I loved how it was so short, yet so full and blossomed.

                   Love,
             xXx~*KELLIE*~xXx
Graduation : January 29th 2004

scorpio
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19 posted 2003-11-18 07:09 PM


Tinker, we'd dance long after the band packed up.  Thank you for the bump.  

Thank you, Kellie.  I do enjoy writing senyrus.  

believe in what your heart feels...

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