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aujussy wolf
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0 posted 2003-11-17 12:00 PM



Always progressing back to the starting point
These old dreams bring back so much that was lost
the things i will never see or hear again...
Mysterious motions deep below the cover
manifesting into a reality of the woven word

The poor feelings of heartbreak...
where to begin looking again
captions of love....a mellow mess
                
                          -2003 JWolfIII

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Seymour Tabin
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Tamarac Fla
1 posted 2003-11-17 12:11 PM


aujussy wolf,
A good read enjoyed.

Earth Angel
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2 posted 2003-11-17 12:43 PM


"captions of love....a mellow mess"

~ Uniquely expressed!


EA

Susan Caldwell
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3 posted 2003-11-17 12:45 PM


"Mysterious motions deep below the cover
manifesting into a reality of the woven word"

Ahhhhhhhhhh...Love these lines...I am willing to bet the moth will to..


"if you won't let me fall for you
then you won't see the best that I would love to do for you"
~Dido~

littlewing
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since 2003-03-02
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4 posted 2003-11-18 12:34 PM


a mellow mess indeed James
but here?

beauty . . .

I never remember my dreams . . .

Nice to see you here again
much missed
xxoo

C?
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5 posted 2003-11-18 05:20 AM


naturally, naturally
C?

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