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Memory (Masquerade Challenge) |
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Wind
since 2002-10-12
Posts 2981
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these lights are paling, broken as the distance slipping away into the sky. an angel’s distorted reflection... things that used to meet at the edges, they’ve worn into miles and miles of earth, a smell that lingers, grows and fades. people change with time. blinking the darkness from my eyes... when you spoke, it was a song, desperate and beautiful. these notes linger, they keep me sound. memory- I am holding on. :::…sorry for the person who wrote this. he/she are so talented and I tried. heh…:: |
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garysgirl 
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
This is beautiful writing, Liz. Is it the Greeneyed One, Lauren? |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
sounds like Meg to me . . . |
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Wind
since 2002-10-12
Posts 2981 |
hehehe.... I'll let some more people guess. What about China? Have you seen the Great Wall? |
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Wind
since 2002-10-12
Posts 2981 |
don't we have to pick someone of wranx's list? I should just break the 'rules' next time. ughh stupid me. What about China? Have you seen the Great Wall? |
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Kaoru
since 2003-06-07
Posts 3892where the wild flowers grow |
Well, Wind.. Whomever it may be, you've done well. And yes, you should break the rules.. that's what they're there for. |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
very beautiful writing Wind...though I am not sure who it is yet... M |
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Wind
since 2002-10-12
Posts 2981 |
nah...it doesn't sound like this person anymore. it did like...5 minutes ago? What about China? Have you seen the Great Wall? |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
What a lovely piece of poetry! Truly lovely, Dear Windy One.  All that I do know for sure about this poem is that I like it lots! Lovin' hugs, EA |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (smiles) Oh Liz, this is beautiful, sweet friend, always hang onto those most precious memories and frame them up safe! (big hugggsssssss) God Bless You, sweet friend, I love this, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Liz, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton I don't need no proof when it comes to God and truth |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
This is wonderful my precious Wind. Chris  Let your life lightly dance on the edges of Time like dew on the tip of a leaf. -Tagore |
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wranx Member Elite
since 2002-06-07
Posts 3689Moved from a shack to a barn |
Hiya Wind! Happy that you took the challenge. The real challenge here was to stretch yourself...look at things from a different viewpoint, which is exactly what you've done. All of us that have tried this, truly honor the one we "mimic", regardless of how sucessful we deem our effort. All of the "challenge" poems are great writes on their own and it may be the nature of poetry to change with each reading. Though you've "written" someone else, the writer, in fact, was Liz. Great job! Ed (wranx) |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
I think its Gem ... and I think the poem rocks...very cool write poetess Liz Words break into splinters on the pages I write |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
God it IS gem , spit her out right this minute Liz *smile* |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
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EvocativeVerse2 Senior Member
since 2003-09-10
Posts 1279 |
Love this Wind. Very well done. I am not very good at guessing who these poems are suppose to be. Lets face it...I am the new kid on the block and have not had the benefit of time to get to know that many styles yet. Still this sounds like gem and littlewing to me. The two are very similiar in style. No matter what the answer is though...I LOVE IT! Remember, if you're not part of the future, you're history! |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
Sounds like Gem to me.... the form matches and the word choices evoke a feeling of her muse.. well done kid... well... well done for a brat  |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
Oh this is outstanding no matter who it is.. "if you won't let me fall for you |
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Wind
since 2002-10-12
Posts 2981 |
It was Gem or littlewing! yes! I'm not a complete failure. I noticed that their styles were similar so...yeah. Funnnnnn What about China? Have you seen the Great Wall? |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
...an absolutely beautiful poem |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
Liz? I saw myself in the italics there . . . *smiling* and Oh My . . it looks like we dueted Oh mann this is soo cool challenge met beautifully missy thank you (and I thought it was Meg at first sheesh)  xxoo |
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