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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA 
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Center stage, lights ablaze. His thoughts captured within the feminine mind that so deftly is able to reach inside and delicately withdraw innermost secrets, desires and fantasies. Why, one might ask are they so adept at the coercive powers of persuasion? Might it be a smile, a curve, a hand lightly touching a knee or a slight but exhilarating glance of heavenly charms cast to the winds of his eyes. Swirling, these thoughts, as pressure is applied ever delicately, softly from a voice that is but a zephyr across a grain laden field. Wave after wave of sensual feelings, vibrations sent to the core of a man’s existence as he rises from his knees... Eyes that say to him, that beckon him yet bring to him uncertainty upon the thought of what might be other than that was felt.....The male mind versus the womanly psyche that confuses yet seduces him....slowly, passionately, as grapes are peeled effortlessly, touching the lips. Each morn brings the whisper of a curtain’s shift, the soft creak of a spring as warmth flows over him. His breath ragged, his hands nervous in anticipation....his dreams flowing in a clear stream of yearn, toward a sea of sensuality....as the tides turn toward the rising moon of her. [This message has been edited by Magnus (09-21-2003 12:28 PM).] |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
This truly touched me.. Susan |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Thanx Susan, I try to leave an impression with the reader.... Pleased you enjoyed. |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
Barry: vibrations sent to the core of a man’s existence as he rises from his knees... smiling here . . . and this is beauty, m'friend xxoo |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Barry...You have a sensitive touch!  |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
"Eyes that say to him, that beckon him yet bring to him uncertainty upon the thought of what might be other than that was felt.....The male mind versus the womanly psyche that confuses yet seduces him....slowly, passionately, as grapes are peeled effortlessly, touching the lips. Each morn brings the whisper of a curtain’s shift, the soft creak of a spring as warmth flows over him. His breath ragged, his hands nervous in anticipation....his dreams flowing in a clear stream of yearn, toward a sea of sensuality....as the tides turn toward the rising moon of her" Okay okay....you asked for it!!!! |
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Bonnie j Senior Member
since 2003-06-27
Posts 1588Ohio |
AH! This is so pretty. "Sigh" Bon-Bon  |
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garysgirl 
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Center stage, lights ablaze. His thoughts captured within the feminine mind that so deftly is able to reach inside and delicately withdraw innermost secrets, desires and fantasies. Why, one might ask are they so adept at the coercive powers of persuasion? Might it be a smile, a curve, a hand lightly touching a knee or a slight but exhilarating glance of heavenly charms cast to the winds of his eyes. Swirling, these thoughts, as pressure is applied ever delicately, softly from a voice that is but a zephyr across a grain laden field. Wave after wave of sensual feelings, vibrations sent to the core of a man’s existence as he rises from his knees... Now, Barry...can we ladies really do all that to you men? Really!! But now, don't ya'll just love it? I thought so!! We sure do love having those powers.  Hugs to you, Ethel |
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Aenimal Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350the ass-end of space |
breathtaking Barry |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (big hugggssssssss) God Bless You, sweet friend, I truly believe God created women so they can help temperate the hearts of man and show them beauty, grace, and how to love, so as to help men appreciate the beauty of love over all else! (smiles) You have a most sensitive heart and soul, sweet friend, you truly have a golden feminine side, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Barry, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton I don't need no proof when it comes to God and truth |
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QjQ Member Elite
since 2003-04-18
Posts 3756U.S.A. |
terrific,,, |
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MARK V SHELDON Member Elite
since 2001-06-21
Posts 3015In a corporeal internship... |
Captured for a brief moment but enjoyed for a lot longer... -MVS You CAN make a difference: |
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Patricia Member Elite
since 2003-04-06
Posts 2160Missouri |
Barry, I read this a few times as I often do with your poems...This is beautiful, it truly is. I walked away, too, with the wondering if all men feel as you and are not able to express the words. You would think some of the mystic of the opposite sex would disappear as we age. It seems, in many ways, I am just as confused as I was 20 years ago about the male species. Of course, I know each individual is unique (oh, wouldn't it be too easy if we could find a commonality, a guideline in the case of male-female relationships), but you left me wondering if deep inside these thoughts exist in every male. Sorry for such a long reply...but I did so enjoy this poem and the thinking it evoked. Patricia |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
I do believe that the feminine ability to entice the male, through many various means and methods is a characteristic that was born within thousands of years ago, and has become a refined art over the generations and centuries. After all, love began when life began, and finding a mate, though somewhat crude way back then, was a part of creation and still is. Some women have the ability to attract without being overly obvious about it. Some men are sensitive enough to see this and some are able to take advantage of it in a way that makes the woman feel special, not just a piece of meat hanging in the freezer or a notch on the old belt of bedding. I won't come out and say I am the perfect, sensitive male. I have made my share of mistakes and eaten a few words from time to time, I am just learning and learning how to express thoughts and feelings in a way that is pleasurable to myself and anyone who might read these little tidbits of me. |
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scorpio Member Ascendant
since 2002-10-02
Posts 5178right...there |
Thank you, Barry, for putting into words the thoughts of many men...I salute you.. believe in what your heart feels... |
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Suetang Member Ascendant
since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187Melbourne, Australia |
Wow, Barry! How I've missed reading your beautifully romantic words. I just don't seem to have the time I once had to indulge in my love of poetry. I recently began visiting an 83 year old lady in my new role as a volunteer and I am loving it. It's so nice to read you again my friend and I hope all is well with you. Take care.........Sue I am in motion |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
I love the way you take my questions, and give me answers to draw upon. Many times a man seems to forget the royalty of his birth, and too many times I woman forgets to stand her ground and remind him. Always a treat to read you Mag. TD |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
Why, one might ask are they so adept at the coercive powers of persuasion? Might it be a smile, a curve, a hand lightly touching a knee or a slight but exhilarating glance of heavenly charms cast to the winds of his eyes. The mystique works both ways... It's a compliment to venus and mars... and the attraction of it all!!! Barry, this is lovely~ |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
Why, one might ask are they so adept at the coercive powers of persuasion? I wonder, too... being one lacking that adeptness. *G* This is beautiful and romantic... I like very much! *S* |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
Oh my... Barry...this is breathtakingly beautiful. Love it, sweet poet... When the power of love overcomes the |
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