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HopeS
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since 2000-12-22
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0 posted 2003-11-13 05:08 AM



Through The Dark Of Silence

Mostly unanswered letters
Only brought about despair
My words were not enough
Writing had got me nowhere

Of feelings that I conveyed
In thank you notes from me
The depths of my devotion
You somehow failed to see

Was it worthwhile appealing
As my writing began to slow
Did words leave there mark
If only you could let me know

Tears flow easier than words
Whilst a await for some sign
Through the dark of silence
Could fading once again shine

HopeĀ©2003

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Margherita
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since 2003-02-08
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Eternity
1 posted 2003-11-13 06:01 AM


Ah, sweet Hope, this hurts. You are beautiful, know this deep in your heart. Whether your words are acknowledged or not by the one you address, you have given love, and love being energy, he has received.

Beautiful talk of your heart.
Love and Light. Margherita

passing shadows
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displaced
2 posted 2003-11-13 06:07 AM


Hope, you know I feel this
HopeS
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3 posted 2003-11-13 06:08 AM


Thank you Margherita , I am so touched by your reply

Hope

HopeS
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4 posted 2003-11-13 06:09 AM


Hugs Dixie ,thank you for your understanding
Hope

Lady Of Light
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5 posted 2003-11-13 08:08 AM


I understand this Hope.  Hugs.
froggy
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Michigan
6 posted 2003-11-13 09:00 PM


Sweet and sad both.
I like this.

:-)

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