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Open Poetry #29

I'm Curious

exhale
Senior Member

since 2003-06-13

Posts 646
Alberta,Canada

0 posted 2003-11-10 12:24 PM

tell me what you're thinking
what you're feeling
i'm curious
turn the music down
i can't hear you
speak up
tell me about your life before we met
who you are
and what do you believe in
i'm curious
i want to know
you
what was your childhood like?
everything
spill yourself on the floor
just so i can be the one to clean it up

[This message has been edited by exhale (11-10-2003 12:57 AM).]

wandering glider
Senior Member

since 2001-04-04

Posts 501
aloft

1 posted 2003-11-10 12:44 PM

Well, this is curious . . .
but be careful
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Your tight phrasing emphasizes your insistence, making this rather demanding in tone. Was that your intent?

Marge Tindal

Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

2 posted 2003-11-10 09:32 AM

Chelsea~
I like this~
The ability to ask and listen is applaudable~

There are times in my life that I wish I had insisted on knowing things about another~
This one touches the reality of me~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram
noles1@totcon.com

KristieSue

Senior Member

since 2003-01-31

Posts 1460
PA, US

3 posted 2003-11-10 09:59 AM

understandable...you can never know too much about the one you care about...

Do songs on the radio sing to all the fools in love?

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