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GG
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Lost in thought

0 posted 2003-09-25 05:00 AM



I’m breathing tears tonight
I’m not sure why,
But you’ve been on my mind so much.

Did you really mean goodbye?
There are crystal tears tonight
But did you mean to say it’s over?

The sky’s like blackened velvet…
And I’m looking to the moon…
Just been wondering if you are too
Because I’m breathing you tonight…

And you’re so far away
Yet I heard you say goodbye.
But I can’t breathe tonight
Did you mean to say its over?

- And so it was that time stood still -
     (blink, breathe, stand, fight)

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Richy
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1 posted 2003-09-25 05:08 AM




Ahhh GG, this is so sad. Try taking slow deep breaths, and try to get some sleep. Maybe try hugging your pillow tonight.

I hope things turn out better, OK.


Pleasant Dreams,

Richy

vlraynes
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2 posted 2003-09-25 05:14 AM



Yes...what Richy said...
pillow hugging...it's a good thing...smile.

You've penned the aching well, GG.
Hugs to you...

When the power of love overcomes the
love of power the world will know peace.
-Jimi Hendrix

[This message has been edited by vlraynes (09-25-2003 05:15 AM).]

Margherita
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3 posted 2003-09-25 05:26 AM


Sad and deeply touching.

May you breath joy.

Love and hugs. Margherita

GG
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4 posted 2003-09-25 05:47 AM


Richy,
*sigh* I wish it was that easy! I should never have sprayed his cologne on my pillow. Deep breaths though, I'm working on. Thanks for the compassionate reply You sleep too!

Vlraynes,
maybe I can find a good stuffed animal.. for now though punching walls and listening to depressing love songs is filling my need just fine... thank you!

Margherita,
glad I got the message across... I wish even the joyed breaths didn't hurt to breathe. But a hope for joy.. I can try that. Thank you, and hugs back.

Always, Alyssa

- And so it was that time stood still -
     (blink, breathe, stand, fight)

vlraynes
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5 posted 2003-10-04 04:51 PM



When the power of love overcomes the
love of power the world will know peace.
-Jimi Hendrix

GG
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since 2002-12-03
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Lost in thought
6 posted 2003-10-07 10:47 PM


thanks vlraynes, you're a sweety

Always, Alyssa

- And so it was that time stood still -
     (blink, breathe, stand, fight)

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